• Member Since 15th Dec, 2011
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DarkJester


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didn't you upload this before already?

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Yes. rewrote it though. I hope you enjoy it!

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As in new scenes? or heavy change in scenes? If so, I'd be willing to give it a read

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The general core of the story remains the same, so if you've already read it, then you probably won't need to do so again, though that's entirely up to you.

I enjoyed this more than I thought I would. Sequel?

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No sequel plans. Glad you enjoyed it though!

Thorax is going to be killing some nations.

How would you feel about a harem shipping?

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Care to elaborate?

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The CMC with Spike.

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What are you asking of me? You want me to write that? Because I'm sorry, I don't take commissions or do requests. :(

only thing i have a problem with is the griffon doesnt fuck her. like come on at least go all the way Gallus! XD

thus the new life of Ocellus begins

I mean... Hell of a way to end this with no plans for a sequel. It seems cruel.

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Cruel for who? ;3

She was so engorged in her work

engorged

*Inigo Montoya voice*I do not think that word means what you think it means.

You should make another one like did with gallus 🤔?

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Like maybe he try to relax a other one of his friends like he did to ocellus in this story

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Sounds like a cool story I'd read. Get on that!

Hey when your next story going to be here?

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Probably not for a while. Lost interest for the most part.

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I think you "cruel for whom?":twilightsmile:

One of my favorite story because I like it when bad thing happen to ocellus i don't know why but I like it 😊

I thought the story was pretty hot, but I'm not really comfortable with the way Gallus did it. I would have preferred he ease her into it. At the end she was worse off than she was before he raped her.

The cliffhanger is killing me what happens next I must know but still great 👍 story I love it 💘💙

Is it wrong that i want a sequel to this?

Comment posted by Monke man deleted May 20th, 2023
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