The Final Chapter

by PenHeart3

The Final Chapter

Author's Note:

Needed when color is cyan

Darkness. That’s all I saw. The pain is unbearable. The rope that tied me, feels like snakes getting tighter, and tighter. Silence was all I herd. Until a voice called out,

“You played right into our hands.” Twilight? “Did you really think that this job just fell out of the sky for you?”

That is what I thought...

“No. This was a gift, for us. You gathered them all together in on place. Just like he ask you to. All of those little souls, in one place. Just for us, a gift.”

I don’t understand.

“Now we can do what we were created to do. And be complete. I will make you proud daddy. Watch. Listen. And be fold...”

*BEEP*

“Connection Terminated. I’m sorry to interrupt you Elizabeth, if you even remember that name. But I’m afraid you’ve been misinformed. You’re not here to receive a gift, nor have you been called here by the individuals you assume, although you have, indeed, been called. You have all been called here. Into a labyrinth of sounds, and smells, misdirection, and misfortune. A labyrinth with no exits. A maze with no prize. You don’t even realized that you are trapped. Your lust for blood has driven you in endless circles, chasing the cries of children in some unseen chamber, always seeming so near, yet some how out of reach. But you will never find them, no of you will. This is were your story ends. And to you, my brave volunteer, who somehow found this ‘job listing’ not intended for you. Although there was a way out planned for you, I have a feeling that’s not what you want. I have a feeling that you are right where you want to be.”

“AAAAHH!!!”

“I am remaining as well, I am nearby. This place will not be remembered, and the memory of everything that started this, can finally begin to fade away. As the agony of every tragedy should. And to you monsters trapped in the corridors, be still, and give up your spirits. They don’t belong to you. For most of you, I believe there is peace, and perhaps more, waiting for you after the smoke clears. Although for one of you,” *screech* “the darkest pit of HELL has opened to swallow you whole.” *screech* “So don’t keep the Devil waiting ‘old friend’. My daughter, if you can hear me, I knew you would return as well. It’s in your nature to protect the innocent. I’m sorry that on THAT DAY, the day you were shut out, and left to die, no one was there to lift you up into there arms, the way of lifted others into yours. And then, what became of you. I should’ve known you wouldn’t be contend to disappear, not my daughter. I couldn’t save you then, so let me save you now. It’s time to rest, for you, and for those you have carried in your arms. This ends, for all of us. End Communication.”

Comments

[Opium4TmassS]

Looks interesting. When I get a chance Ill take a read.

[Opium4TmassS]

Wow this is good ^^

[PenHeart3]

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Thanks. It means a lot to me.

Sorry for asking but, are you a boy?

[Opium4TmassS]

8946545
Yes I am

[PenHeart3]

8946949
Are you Discord in the creepy toys universe?

*takes out a stake*

[Opium4TmassS]

8965458
well in that universe Discord is a giant black worm so huge he's wrapped around the earth. with stump wings and claws much to small for his body

[PenHeart3]

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Hang on a minute, while I call the S.C.P. Foundation, and report a Keter class object.

[Opium4TmassS]

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lol

[PenHeart3]

8965483
I made a Q&A. If you have questions, put it in the comment section if needed.

btw, we CANNOT contain Discord. We can’t even fit him in the van.

[Opium4TmassS]

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I like this a lot. Interesting story.

[Silence_EXE]

Hm. I must admit, the act of placing a video into the story so as to give ambience was an interesting touch. The story, for a start, was also a good building block to start on.

Please do not think of this as an insult to your writing. These are simply tips I have, for every story involves positives and negatives.

1. In all honesty, you should get an editor or prereader. It would improve your grammar and such.
2. Your writing seems to go in all sorts of different directions, for instance, the recording seemed to come out of nowhere.
3. Never add more detail than necessary.
4. Do not forget to start a new paragraph when a new character begins speaking.

I pray you will take this advice to heart and adjust your writing appropriately. Please do continue trying, as I will support you throughout your writing.

And as always, May the Stars guide you and the Darkness fear you.

- Silence.EXE

[PenHeart3]

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Understandable. This was a one shot really, I don't know how long it will be until the Truth Behind MLP series actually ends, so this is where the Alt. Ending thing appears. Also Chapter 2 of The School for the Mindless is out. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Explodingkitten55]

sigh
fnaf 6 funny meme used as an actual chapter

[PenHeart3]

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It wasn’t really much of a meme when this was made but fair enough