A lazy person from Poland who loves changelings and likes to write from time to time, even though he's not the best at it.
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One night Thorax finds a human child in the Hive and decides to take care of him because this child seems to not remember who his real parents are. As the time flies Thorax starts to see this human as his son and the human starts see Thorax as his father.
(I suck at summaries)
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Interesting, there aren’t many stories with changrlings taking care of human kids around. Good start to me BUt I find Thorax’s reaction to the boy a bit too fast.
awesome
I'll keep my eye on it but I do hope that the human isnt another gary stue
Whatever you do, Please don't have it on incomplete or on hiatus, then never work on it again. If you lose interest, thats fine, just put it on cancelled if you don't want to work on it anymore. And if you still want to work on it, keep up the good work.
I know its wrong and I know what it's actually suppose to say but it made me laugh anyway
Well I'm maybe not a fan of his new look, but I think this could be very interessting.
Please don’t let this story be onther left unfinished one
Can you make the next chapter
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The next chapter is 60% done so I might finish it and release it next week.
Also I'm working on the first chapter of my another story which is called ''Equestrian Cartel''
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ok. 'Equestrian Carte?
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A story about drug cartel in Eqeustria. Fanfic is heavily inspired by the Tv series "Narcos".
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Never heard of it
Nice. Didn't except a different reaction from throrax's Brother.
I can't wait for the reveal that Okame eats meat.
uncle Pharynx. I can't wait to see how this is going to play out, even if I want himm to keep his personality and have the boy being a bit wary about him, I image Pharynx rescuing him and then maybe train him a bit.
Awesome!
This is going to be a good friendship lesson for the changling race
Are you going to make the next chapter
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Yes. I'm planning to but I don't when I'll post it. I may finish it and post it somewhere in August but I can't promise anything. I can also say that the chapter is 35% done.
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35% done.
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Yup.
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oh
I love it and I forgive you
AWESOME!
Very nice!
I love the walking dead as well
i'd ship okame and oceilus but no romance tag. oh well. great story i look forward to your next chapter
I would probably search for something about the Changelings first instead of Luna and Celestia.
Meh not sure if that is reason enough for me, it would be enough to get told about the event i guess.
Maybe because he lives with them I didn't exactly expected "them" to get so important so soon again.
The story is interesting, Just some that need editing and Fix But overall its a good story idea .
You don't need to be afraid of me, like I said I'm going to hurt you. Edit this line, I did a double take when I read it
I can´t wait when Okame gets in trouble with Pharynx or an another changeling and Thorax must be strict on him.
I'll keep my eye on it.
Eine sehr schöne Fanfiktion, immer mehr davon
So this storys dead?
Is he going to redo it someday or just move on just saw it
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Currently, I have no plans in redoing this story.
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Ok enther way I can’t wait for the next story
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😔
continue it