2: There were some grammatical errors throughout; mostly commas placed in the wrong places, among other things. A deeper proofread (or two) would take care of that.
3: It was alright. Good enough to track for a while. There was nothing, admittedly, markedly special about it, prose or content wise, but it is an introductory chapter, so there is some latitude allowed in that respect.
So overall, not bad. There aren't enough good CMCs stories in the world.
Ok.
1: Your name is Salted Pingas. Awesome.
2: There were some grammatical errors throughout; mostly commas placed in the wrong places, among other things. A deeper proofread (or two) would take care of that.
3: It was alright. Good enough to track for a while. There was nothing, admittedly, markedly special about it, prose or content wise, but it is an introductory chapter, so there is some latitude allowed in that respect.
So overall, not bad. There aren't enough good CMCs stories in the world.
975434 Thanks . I do think I have some problems with commas, I was never really good with them.