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Salted Pingas
I salt mah pingas over nine thousaaaaand times in ten seconds flat.
Salted Pingas
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Ok.
1: Your name is Salted Pingas. Awesome.
2: There were some grammatical errors throughout; mostly commas placed in the wrong places, among other things. A deeper proofread (or two) would take care of that.
3: It was alright. Good enough to track for a while. There was nothing, admittedly, markedly special about it, prose or content wise, but it is an introductory chapter, so there is some latitude allowed in that respect.
So overall, not bad. There aren't enough good CMCs stories in the world.
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. I do think I have some problems with commas, I was never really good with them.
Apologies if this chapter isn't as good as some of the other ones. This was more of a filler chapter for tying up a few loose ends and introducing the Mane 6 to Stirrups/Malum and I suck at those type of chapters. The next one will be better, but might take a bit longer since School starts soon and my new job is also gonna cut a necessary hole in my free time.
The scene cutting to Applejack wasn't necessary.
Anyone have any good ideas for pranks that could backfire horribly?
Oh for f*ck's sake people, if you're going to dislike then at least have the common fucking courtesy to give a good goddamned reason.
1607577 I'd cover up that spoiler alert part mate. i'll have to catch up on this story later but I have read the first couple chapters (read the first one a long time ago) I'll sponsor this in the next chapter, only one sponsor per chapter.
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Another fucking unexplained dislike? OH COME ON!!!