Word of advice: to tie in with the first story, have them visit the restaurant

I'm sorry that he had a bad family you can get bad family great work cant wait for the next chapter

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Yeah, that's what I meant

Well what do we have here, a bit of sexy fun with moondancer? this is gonna be fun. Nice to see her getting more love.

Good job my friend!! ANy news on the changeling story? Or any others currently in development?

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my editor is planning on helping me out with the rest of the story since I'm way behind on it

Nice start, dude!

This is good so far. I mean the pacing is pretty fast but Im still enjoying it.

Luna giggled as she was sure her husband would have already told you that. “Dear subject, you are in the great city of Canterlot which is the capital of our land, Equestria,” she explained placing a gentle hand on your shoulder as you continued to look out the window.

And yet, the names of these places still doesn't give him any geographical understanding of where he is. Nobody brings a map or gets a map, or even a globe, for these displaced humans to know where they are.
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like I said, that, I'm trying my hardest, okay? My editor and I aren't scientists

Your father was a pretty harsh prosecutor while your mother was always helping him at work. They would constantly leave you with a babysitter every time they spent countless days working at the office.

Yeah....

"working."