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I’m cuckoo for Coco Pommel!

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This story is a sequel to If You Give a Little Love...


Almost a year after adopting Babs Seed, Coco Pommel's life has never looked better. After forging connections both inside and outside her filly's family and facing the darkest moments of her life, she's finally ready to put her past beside her and settle down for real. But as her play prepares to go on tour, as her love life heats up, and as Rarity makes her an all-too-tempting offer, Coco finds that ordinary family life is far more complicated than she ever imagined.

Changes abound, but love lasts forever. And Coco Pommel has always been a mare full of love.

Takes place around S6-S7. Knowledge of the past series is not required for this story, as it's mainly a series of slice-of-life episodes. Coverart by DreamscapeValley

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 26 )
JMP

This was a fantastic start. I guess the moral of the story is "Never let Scene Stealer get the last word", huh.

The joy I feel is immeasurable, I'm only a quarter way through the first one and I'm already getting more to read.

“Negative one barrels of oats on the wall, negative one barrels of oats…”

Um what:rainbowlaugh:?! Where the hay did that come from?!

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This is actually based on a time when I sang the song all the way through and included the "negative one" but after it's finished. It's basically trolling people into thinking it'll go on forever, and no, it doesn't make much sense if you sit down and think about it.

JMP

Nothing wrong with striking a balance between comedy and drama.

No, especially after everything I’ve put her through.

Babs it’s not your fault:fluttershysad:.

“I guess that means we don’t have to go to the science museum today,” Coco teased. “Since these pillows work about as well as the plasma balls they have there.”

Bedmane Coco and Babs are the best:rainbowkiss:!

“Nopony should have the right to make you feel that way,” Coco finally whispered, going back to some semblance of her old self. “That reporter probably knew the minute he said it that you were going to blame yourself for it, so that makes him the one at fault. So let me just say this: if anypony wants to make you go back to the pony you were before, the one who always doubted herself, don’t listen. Because you’re becoming such a great pony, and I never want you to have to go through anything like that again. I never want you to think you’re hurting me.”

Cause your not Babs:pinkiesad2:.

“Because if it means being with you, I don’t care if I hear a million of those rumors. I know in my heart that they’re wrong, and I know in my heart that we can beat him together.”

Damn right you can:rainbowdetermined2:!

“Besides,” Coco finally finished with a grin, “Mosely probably would’ve messed with me even if you hadn’t come into the picture. He would’ve found some other reason for making my life be miserable, and I wouldn’t have gotten the best daughter in the world out of the deal. My life would have a lot less sunshine without you in it, that’s for sure.”

Yes she would have, and dawwww:heart:!!!

JMP

This was really fun to read. And I think you're allowed a little self-insert, since I wouldn't have guessed anything if you didn't say so, and it was a great addition to the story.

“I’m not like most fillies. And you’ve put on enough things for me with Nightmare Night and Hearth’s Warming. I figure I owe you one.”

Oh Babs, please stop this...:pinkiesad2:.

Granted, the mare still hadn’t gotten around to telling her daughter just how old she was, but the fact that Coco had managed to forget her own birthday was embarrassing in and of itself.

Seriously, first Pinkie and now Coco:derpyderp2:? How are ponies forgetting their own birthdays:facehoof:?!

She had been born beautiful, so that she could bring beauty and happiness to their lives.

...and she will:twilightsmile:.

The pony who’d started all of this, Babs thought to herself. My father.

An iredeemable bastard:twilightangry2:.

Another great chapter! I can’t wait to see what happens next:pinkiehappy:!

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If you’re talking about Babs’ father, he wasn’t Mosely. He was an aromatherapist related to the Flim Flam Brothers. If you’re talking about Mosely, then call him that by all means. :rainbowlaugh:

8987687

He wasn’t brought up in a while, so it’s cool. Glad you enjoyed.

JMP

Hmm. This definitely is a bit of a question, huh. Coco seems pretty happy where she is currently, though working at Rarity's shop would probably be great for her career. But at the same time, Coco doesn't really have a reason other than Rarity's vague concerns over the industry to leave her position at Silver Phoenix.

9072567

Exactly. Most of this stems from the fact that, while Coco's more assertive now, she still has a hard time saying no to ponies. (Since her major friend in canon before Rarity was Suri, there's probably a good reason for that.) Plus, she still has Rarity on a pedestal, and therefore doesn't want to disappoint her. So it's basically more of a "friendship problem" arc that I came up with after the Saddle Row Review episode tried to give Coco a new job out of the blue. I'll try my best to resolve all this in my own way.

JMP

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Yeah, I getcha. Hopefully Coco can really decide what makes her the happiest

“I don’t see a problem,” Babs said when Coco asked about it. “Apple Bloom’s told me stories about Sweetie Belle tearing the whole store up tryin’ to find her Crusader cape. I figure it’s just one of those deals.”

Considering the shenanigans that the CMC get into, I'm not surprised:ajsmug:.

“Can’t there be another way through this?” Babs muttered. “Just ‘cause it happened before doesn’t mean it’ll happen again. You shouldn’t let your friendship get ruined over it.”

Don't let their friendship get ruined:raritycry:!

“Friendship isn’t always easy, but there’s no doubt, it’s worth fighting for.”

Callback to the Season 2 Primer:scootangel::rainbowdetermined2:!

She and everypony else on this bus was destined to be an ordinary celebrity, never somepony who could liberate entire lands with barely a thought.

should you wouldn't become someone who could liberate entire lands with barely a thought, liberation is all well good so long as A. It actually is a liberation and B. You have a plan for what happens after said liberation, it definitely requires more than a single thought for a liberation to be achieved and even more thoughts that what comes from said liberation is something stable and works for the good of all.

Can not believe I missed this somehow!
Tracking now...

9678566

IRL novel writing was starting to take a priority over it. I might eventually complete it, but it would probably just be a couple more chapters at the most.

9678637
If you are going to complete it, why was it cancelled?

10136306

I was unsure of whether or not to complete it when I made this announcement. After a lot of thought, I decided a sequel this close to the events of the original didn’t really work for me, and retconned it so Let Somepony Love You (Before It’s Too Late) is the new distant sequel to IYGALL.

I’m finishing up my novel right now, but rest assured that more parts of that will be coming!

“Negative one barrels of oats on the wall, negative one barrels of oats…”

(snorts with amusement) Somepony is definitely bored. :rainbowlaugh:

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