Beauty and fragility are two qualities found in life itself. When tragedy strikes, Rainbow Dash tells a story of how the Element of Kindness first came to know how fragile life is.
Cover art by me.
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ElementOfFaith
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*reads first chapter* welp, my feels have been shattered. Someone grab a box of tissues
Poor Fluttershy...Reminds me of a Calvin and Hobbes story arc where the two find a hurt raccoon...
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I am not familiar with that one, but interesting to read that you made a connection between them.
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My thoughts exactly! Glad to find another fan here.
This is looking good, author. Didn't see any glaring errors, and your characterizations feel authentic.
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Though, when I first tried to submit it to Equestria Daily, the mods there pointed out more than a few errors, so this might not even be the final print.
Aw, thanks!
I'm glad you like the story, so far!
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It's been years since I tried submitting anything to EqD, and their rejection stung even though I was only a proofreader for the story.
Unrelated, have you read The Descendant's "So Being What We Sow"? Even though your story is its own being, it might interest you to see how someone else envisioned Fluttershy coping with grief.
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Ooh, I'll have to look into that. Thanks. =3