Whenever Twilight was signing autographs, including the last one being Star Tracker, she went to find her family only to see them having fun watching the northern stars. She cries of course. But, instead of standing there, she runs back to her room, crying just like she did in Once upon a zeppelin. Then, someone comes to comfort her in the unlikely source of friendship that others would say "chaotic."
P.S., I mean she cried just like she did.
20 Austrailians arrested.
Uh yeah... Some problems with this story. Part one? If so, why is this story marked complete? You don't just post one chapter of a story and mark it complete, and what I assume you'll do next is post the next part as a separate story.
Plus, Twilight's so OOC here it seems more like you're speaking rather than her. Just an excuse for fans to hug their Twilight plushies and say "Yay!" to borrow a phrase from Deadpansnarker. Blog posts exist for a reason.
Twilight is very emotional like me, but I don't really have anger and rage issues like her, unless it's necessary, but sometimes over the simplest things XD
Either way, I can relate to her lol 😊 Great story so far btw. 😄
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Ummm you have heard of paragraphs...that makes it easier to read........not that it matters the grammar is horrible.
Out of character.
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Thanks dude.
OBJECTION:
Iron Will did NOT teach Fluttershy to be a bully, she did that on her own. Rarity told her to be a flirt to get what she wants and Pinkie told her to swindle others. And Fluttershy swindled Iron Will by lying.
I swear, the only way I can put my stories in fimfiction is if I mark them completed. I might try to fix them. So, for this story, just pretend its on Hiatus. Okay? Is that hard, to ask?
I swear, the only way for me to put my stories on this site is if I mark them completed. So, just for this story, can you please pretend that its on hiatus. Also I have a little of OCD so I put a lot of detail into my stories. Is that so hard, to ask?
Next chapter.
Wow *stands up and claps for Discord* was hoping one day Discord would unleash pain on someone for talking bad about or hurting Fluttershy.
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Thanks man.
Twilight knew who Iron Will was when it was revealed he was running the cruise, his teaching Fluttershy to be assertive was his only other in-show appearance, Twilight should know this already.
Yes you did.