• Member Since 13th Oct, 2012
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mysticxeno


I write stories every now and then but I have alot of self esteem problems so just giving it my all.

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..... dear god all those tags.

8804890
Sorry I had to make sure I got all the tags I needed. There is way more in here then that even. X.x

What's with the crossover tag?

8805098
There will be crossovers from other universes. I have plans to bring in a few characters for story development.

There 's a profanity tag now? That's new.

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Saw that and knew I had to put it in xD

This fic does nothing that hasn’t been done a hundred thousand times with the same characters and the same scenarios. Sorry but I like a splash of creativity in my fanfiction.

very short, kinda meh on creativity, definitely could use more. i like it, but at the very least, it needs to be longer.

I am working on It I have alot in mind and this will have a lot of crossovers is the intention. Just I haven't had the time to do chapter 3 yet i have a bit written up so look forward to it. ^^

Huh, lucky Flutters... :yay:

Now Fluttershy has something to brag a little when she is with Rarity--she got Spike to first base, whereas Rarity hasn't even gotten to the plate with him (probably trying so hard to get him with her younger sister)

It's refreshing that Fluttershy is the one that Spike may have romatic feelings about, just when Spike's turning legal and it is okay to respond back to those advances.

Also, I think it would be too early for Spike and Fluttershy to do the Horizontal Tango on their first night together. Flutters may be a bit repressed, but we have to remember that she is still a bit shy and reserved. It would be OOC for Flutters to jump him at the first opportunity, especially since Spike just turned 18. It would be a little more relaxed.

But I do understand if you want Spike to take advantage of his week-long rest before he has to be on his journey to see Ember, so it could be like a "I'll be here waiting for you" kind of sendoff if Flutters is the first to punch Spike's V-card. I know Celestia would be pleased that her son got intimate with somepony that does care and have feelings for him as well.

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