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Ever since the incidents with Discord and Iron Will, Fluttershy has tried to avoid being cruel. One day, however, after she gets a letter telling her that her parents have passed away, poor Fluttershy falls into depression and thinks things can't get worse. But then her discorded self appears in her room, but how? Is she here for revenge? Or is it something else?
Edit: Added some words and included the song "Leave the Memories Alone" by Fuel.
Edit 2: Fixed some mistakes.
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I don't quite know why you chose the tag "Tragedy", as I don't think it ends bad... It's just... a sweet little
story, but not a tragedy.
Not sure what to think of this...
992587 The tragedy in the story is the death of Fluttershy's parents.
992598
Sure, but I think the end matters. Fluttershy's parents die, but in the end it doesn't really matter, since fluttershy and her "sister" are happy.
ai haz a sad nao
That was wierd but satisfying
Just one opinion:
I'm not so sure that "Slice of Life" is a good tag choice for this story. That's usually reserved for something that's indistinguishable from the format that a writer at Hasbro and DHX Media could pick up and could use for an actual episode. Since they've dodged around actual death scenes or mentions of death before, I don't think they'd risk using a death as a main plot point.
End of critic mode.
That's a fairly well written story.
One question. Will you perhaps make a little mini series out of this. Because I for one want to know how Ponyville...no... All of Equestria would react to two Fluttershys and how their life would continue on from this point. And if you are not.... look at Applebloom and say no
994547 I will make a sequel to this and not only will it involve the two Fluttershy's and the reaction of all of Equestria, but it will also involve a certain Cutie Mark Crusader.
994595 maybe have fluttercruel have a name change to something less cruel like posey or something if you get what i mean
994595
You my good sir have earned yourself a follower.
994595 r u cm punk? also is the crusader
994828 I am not CM Punk. And you guessed very good because you are right. Your prize for getting the right answer is 4 happy Pinkies.
994984 could you change fluttercruel's name change to something less cruel like posey
995058 You'll see what I do.
995091 KAY
At first I was like
then I was like 
and now I'm like 
cute story! Can't wait to see the rest of Ponyville's reaction!
10/10 story of the year i cried epic tears
Will there be another sequel? Pwease?