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Swefn


Been a while since I've been here

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Spike decides to write a letter to Celestia, informing her that he's awoken from his one hundred year slumber.



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A bit too tear-bait-y for my liking, to be honest. Doesn't really stand out from the countless other 'sad for the sake of being sad' and 'all your waifus are dead' stories.

That said, the structure and grammar weren't too bad, and it only had a couple of typos here and there. A solid effort, but there's definitely room for improvement.

*wipe a small tear from my eye*

Damn onion cutting ninja's cutting there dann onions :twilightangry2::fluttercry:

((I all searesnes this was a nice read))

:trollestia: Dear Spike your assignment has changed .... Twilight has gotten older but she is fine she has a generous offer for you....very generous

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:trollestia: and Pinkie estate has some explaining to do....

i have so much feces protruding out of my anal cavity over this story that i have begun to cry.

slightly better than deathly bloodblade.

not really.

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