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It's good to be back
Yes, I know I have a loose sense of continuity
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Welcome back!
Continuity is for biscuitkickers. We roll with it.
Character tags
Okay so now that I read this. It was good.
Blueblood's story screams of lust, but at the same time a deeper sorrow. Spike's story conveys love, and sadly, a determination meet with bittersweet return. I'm always into a good Sparity and a happy ending. This is not the case here however, but it is very well written.
All the same, add the damn character tags.
Very good descriptions, has a lot of potential! You will add more to this later, right?
I love the juxtaposition between Blueblood's carnal lust and Spike's naive innocence. It was short and bitter, and I wish that there was more... Even so, this is well-done as a stand alone piece.
It's interesting, I'll say. I'll probably never have the stones to write something like this. Yet, this story of sweet unrequited love is delicious on my tongue despite my green eyed envy.
Good work.
Well... rather short but I have to say, even then you captured both stories/characters/whatever so well!
This was actually a lot more touching than I expected for a story with one thousand words.
The descriptions are lovely.
nicely written , Castle Sweet Castle she still bats her eyes at him
Anything for you Rarity
Spike!