varying and wildly dispersed stories, of which circuit from the brony show throw's at me every week in my never ending attempt to become a better writer
This story is about Twilight and improving her computer via her best source MAGIC and she enters cyber space.
Nothing much else to say just a simple writing challenge I tried to be cute with
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Thanks hadn't noticed that when I sent it up.
Not bad. Good use of Pinkie, particularly her dropping off cupcakes in the real world. However, this could use a proofreading revision; I'm seeing lots of basic capitalization and punctuation errors that interrupt the flow of the story.
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thanks, if I get a editor I'll have them look over this but alas I don't write enough yet so I don't have a editor. I'll try and go over it myself and fix up what I can.