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An Intricate Disguise


Selling out has never felt so dirty.

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Man, Life is Strange got really weird with this sequel. Literally photography porn now.

B_25 #2 · Feb 28th, 2018 · · ·

Been a while since we've had a spilight. Even longer since a well-written one.

Let's dive in, boys.

What happens when he's caught in a compromising position, photo in claw?

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So... why were Starlight’s photos in the drawer instead of with the rest of the stash?

Was he perhaps sharing/showing them to someone else?

Yaaay! Been wanting more Twispike :pinkiesmile:

Well, that was interesting!!

Wish there was a timberwolf bitch x Spike story, or maybe Philomena or Female Sphinx x SPike story.

That's all.

Great chapter really. Spike is such a fun character and it is a shame we don't see him more. I love to see you do him since you seem to have fun with such crazy topics with him. I would love like I said before to see you do more. I am super happy to see you do one of my fave pairings here with the Spilight for sure. I would honestly love to see you take on a Spike x Shy story where Shy is a super sub to a Dom Spike and the two have been hiding their relationship, maybe to only be caught this time around lol. Or the girl find out Spike have been teaching the CMC what it means to be a adult, hell a affair story with Spike just ruining the bbw Ms.Cake could be epic as well. Long story I just would love to see you do more stories with Spike as the main star lol.

Almost every pony love having a photo of Rainbow's sweet ass :rainbowkiss:

A great story!

Good story, wished they went all the way though.

From friends to Friends with Benefits.

Ever heard of barrel sex?

Doesn't really do anything with its premise, then again, I'm unsure how much could be done with it in the first place.

The scope of porn fics is how kinky can you make the sex. Character attachment, depth, and such help fuel the kinkiness.

The fic spends too long getting to the sex with conflict that isn't explored due to the scope. Spike is worried about the repercussions for the photos, is told he would have gotten them anyway, then gets a blowjob.

Your conflicts tend to be half-baked and easily resolved. We know they're going to fuck, so there is no suspense or worry. You couple play against the audience expectations somehow and still keep the sex but don't.

You also can't give the depth the conflicts need to be properly executed. It's not within the scope of the story. This is understandable, but it begs the question: why introduce these profound conflicts in the first place?

They don't develop, they can't be explored, they are easily resolved. They take up the plot and hold back the sex without making the act kinkier.

The solution is either to use remove the profound plot or use it solely to amplify the act of sex.

This was written at 5 AM. What the fuck am I doing with my life?

TwiSpike...oh yes.

Somehow this has enough promise to continue for a sequel

fuck me I was rating soothing like this too.
bad spelling have friends to help me when done.
BUCK PONIES 2
SPIKE BOOK FUN
Spike was in the librarie doing all the things a teen age boy do alony.
twilite was done sters do resch for prencsses murlester whell she was in a mittle of a book she culd her a nores comeing from spike room so she could out to him but no anser came back so she want up sters and lis for the nores but nothing so she watted nothing came after 2 minits so she stat to go back done sters but the nores stert agen and it was coming from spikes room so she sniks to his dooer and pot an ear to it and the nores got lader so she opend the dooer and see spike muster bating to somthing in a black and gold picher flame.
wat 1 minit that the flame with my pich in it wat do i do wat do i do well its is hat to see him likes that so wat will it fill like if i pot it in me wat well it tas like

Wow, funny and hot:heart::twilightsmile:

That was hot!:rainbowwild:
Which the potential to be hotter!!!:trollestia:

Good job!:moustache::twilightsmile:

Ho-ho-holy fuck that was heartracing

Great story!

TwiSpike is simply the best!
And of course everyone wants to have the picture of Rainbow.

"Mmh, that's a good photo..." Starlight rapidly shook her head, clearing her thoughts. "Not the point!" She flicked through the photos faster before turning to Spike with a glare. "Why aren't there any of me? Am I not good enough, or something?"

Why aren't there any of Starlight in story's tags? Is she not good enough, or something? :rainbowlaugh:

Second chapter with Twilight leashed and collared, full BDSM dynamic would be nice.

Really hot! More please.

WOW please say there's a squeal.

You, sir need both help and a double upvote feature. Also, add a comedy tag.

Closes briefcase and minimizes window. Closes phone and laptop.

Sound of shoes on a concrete surface moving fast. Sound slowly fades out.

Turns on the light. Has a mental breakdown and up again.

lol, Cute and steamy! A very nice combination!

i would really like to see a 2nd Chapter or Sequel in how Spike walks Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle like dogs. (Except their Ponies, and it being brought up in the comments earlier, too.) I mean, this has to be continued and the quality of literature needs to keep being up like an Great Movie or Great Independent Movie.:pinkiehappy:

Ohh Starlight, you silly pony

Glimmy seems to be having mood swings.

In the end, everyone wants Rainbow Dash. This is a curious thought, coming from a fic about Spike, Twilight and Starlight.

Spike loved photography; he also loved masturbating.

What a way to open

Very lewd and juicy, thank you for the PUSSY!
I enjoyed streaming this and I am happy I read it.

I don't usually like to tell authors what stories to write - because it makes me sound demanding - but you absolutely must write a sequel. You must! The entire universe... no, the multiverse is counting on you!:flutterrage:

Please? Pretty please?:duck:

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I second the motion!

Of course, he had the same porn stash that any drake of his age should, from lingerie magazines to the triple X ones that he had to specifically ask for from behind the counter, but there was something special about his revealing pictures of Twilight Sparkle, not that she knew they existed. He'd become an expert in covert snapshots, hiding under a table or behind a crystal pillar, angling the camera downwards whenever she asked him to take a photo of her.

Wait. WHAT?!?!?

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That could be the oddest metaphor I’ve heard.

What happens when he's caught in a compromising position, photo in claw?

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"I'm not happy with you, but half of that reason is that you should have came to me first rather than... well, rather than this! How long has this been going on, Spike?"
But he did cum to her first!
*rimshot*

He felt as if she should have turned tail and ran by now, but still she remained rooted in place, having a casual conversation with him as if he wasn't stood there with his dick hanging out.

I've never laughed so hard in my life then right now.

Awesome read and also... Strange female behavior...

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