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An Intricate Disguise
Selling out has never felt so dirty.
An Intricate Disguise
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Oi you fucking cunt
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no u
sexy pinkie is best pinkiecdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/8/81/Spr_2c_195_s.png
So good old mare on mare sex?! Didn't see it cumming, but neither did, Twilight!
Great job! As usual!
Came for the coverart. Stayed for the story.
When you run out of competition, so you try to knock yourself out of the feature box with one of your own stories.
All I can say is
S E Q U E L P L Z
*wolf whistles*
Sexy Pinkie is sexy.
Oh, I'll actually read this one. Thanks!
Well, after reading this, I got an impression that if you replace all names with "Mare 1", "Mare 2", etc, and remove "nervsbarassed" and its' variations - it would be next to impossible to guess who the characters are by what they do and say in the story. It didn't really feel like Twilight and Pinkie to me. Gratuitous usage of "hell" and "fuck" didn't help too.
Also, Twilight suddenly grew a hand in place of her hoof
Three of your stories are in the feature box at the same time. Damn, that’s impressive.
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When you say that, I'd have to agree with you. While the lack of personal distinctiveness didn't bother me that much, the swear words did. OOC is one of the biggest turn offs for me, and cursing/swearing using words like "fuck" is the epitome of OOC in an MLP fanfic, with a few exceptions here and there.
But everyone has their own tastes, and this is mine. To each their own, as they say.
9026522
Four as of this moment. Congratulations!
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Wow, the amount of dislikes that one would get for commenting only "First" on a story on Fimfiction. This is the first time I've seen its kind here, and I have to say this is also the first time I've a comment with this many dislikes without a day even passing.
...Hell, YouTube is better.
Delicious Shit my dude.
~Skeeter The Lurker
The first actual clop I've read in a long time, and I'm glad that it was this one. Very nice and sexy.
Oh, and I loved the narrative, and how it was formatted. Almost like the narrative itself represented Twilight's thoughts. Nicely done.
9026634
Is it safe to say it's a record?
That was very sweet.
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The dislikes? Well, there are probably worse out there.
You only said "First!" Other people out there seem to be intent on getting dislikes; insulting other people and the like.
9024848
There's nothing wrong with fucking cunts.
9028787
Touche
Awesome fic I really liked the vunrable acting pinkie it was nice to see a new side of her.
I must be as big of a nerd as Twilight, for out of the entire story, this part had to be my favorite:
Either way, that was an amazing story, and it just so happened to be the first pony story I've read in two-ish months. I must thank you for making my return so glorious.
Well done and great story telling. I normally dong go for Twipie but it was good, really makes your brain visualize the scenes.
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My only thought at that point was "Did you just see speech?"
Wow,
steamy hot and perfect mood setting...
Pinkie would be a pleaser she loves to make others smile and feel good ...
Twi has to step up her game and return some of that.
really good
J
Loved it. It's always nice when a story takes the time to have a proper build-up.
https://knowyourmeme.com/photos/453775-my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic
That has got to be the bast damn
piratepony I have ever seen.These are not mutually exclusive things, for the record. In fact, being a genius lends itself really well to winging it, as it were.