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Here we go with the next story in this series!
This will be a monthly-released story, and despite the mane focus being Spitfire and Soarin, we are going to have Rainbow Dash and Thunderlane involved. The story is placed a few months after Mistress' Magic, so I will leave it up to readers to extrapolate what they wish from that.
*Reads*
8735277 It was funny, I started this story off, initially, with this:
But then I employed my favorite tool. I call it, "Fuck writing exposition," and it is best deployed any time the exposition sounds so awesome that it would be more interesting than what you were planning to write. So I deleted the paragraph (after posting it to Discord with the statement "Screw just telling that. Imma show it!"), and wrote the above instead.
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I wish I had a tool like that, too bad I suck at writing (And trust me, I tried doing it for 2 years but I gave up since it was really cringy)
Aaaaand tracking~!
"Part-Timer?"
8742081 Thanks! Not sure what you're asking. I write daily, but this particular story is a commission paid for monthly.
I was thinking of nicknames. :-p
8742607 Ah! Hee.
Loving it! Hope there's more soon?
8786916 This one is a monthly commission through Patreon. So April will be the next chapter.
Yay for switches! Double the fun, and always *so* surprising in threesomes! ;)
8879935 These two are a lot of fun to write.
Well, I'd say things are coming along (in all senses of the word) nicely.
To the shop owner: Do your clients usually yell out what they are looking for, and do you have anything nice in the way of bridles?
8915573 Heh, I don't do the questions on this one.
Bet Spitfire’s gonna love it
8916307 I'm sure she will. After all, Soarin did get his and hers.
Is there some kind of magic aura on Thunderlane that makes everypony else way more open and eager to kinky play? It doesn't feel... convincing (?) That everyone who has a name in Equestria is suddenly curious and very willing to try bdsm play. It kinda feels a bit clocktowery without the james bond supervillain bases they have.
8922627 Firstly, I'll point out these are commissioned stories, the characters are dictated to me in advance. As for their play in this case, I don't think what Soarin and Spitfire are doing is really what most people would call BDSM. I mentioned such for the dominance play Rainbow Dash and Thunderlane partake in.
Ultimately, if it's not convincing, I'm sorry.
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I'm sorry for how I worded that. And forgetting it was commissioned. I do still like it. Unconvincing is not quite the right word. I'm not sure what is. It's written great at any rate. I certainly wasn't meaning any ill, was just remarking on how the story felt
When is the next chapter comiinng
8983100 It's written, and will be coming on Friday.
Nice chapter
8987647 Thanks!
Ah bridles, is there anything they can't do.
Also, "they?" Is Dash having twins?
9040249 They as in the gender neutral pronoun, singular.
I don't picture spitfire as the anal type but that's still an enjoyable read!
9044960 She's a mare with needs just like everypony else. And thanks!
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haha tru.
They are just cute
9061446 Thanks!
Horsebirds of a feather...!
9069401 Windy is just the right pony to help them, and their games seem to scratch some of the itches her husband can't. Hondo has his own reasons for going along with this, as may be shown. I can't help wondering that there might be a loose end nopony has thought about yet...
Omfg-
Rainbow Dash is gonna be mad to this
9069668 Surprisingly, the following comic had no actual bearing on this (it was entirely the commissioner's idea to have it be Windy Whistles).
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That comic
Windy still fits tho I thought If it was Fluttershy at first
9069698 Considering Rainbow and Fluttershy got pregnant within a few weeks of each other, she would have had a proud belly too.
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Hondo is Rarity's dad Bow is Dash's - unless THAT'S THE LOOSE END?!?
DUN-DUN-DUNNNNNN!
9069821 Gah! This is what I get for replying first thing in the morning! Yeah, Bow Hothoof, of course.
Or is it?!?!?!?!??!?!??!?!?!?111/1/1/1//1?!one
Shyamalan twist - this whole chapter is the result of an elaborate plot to get into the maternity ward with Dashie so they can cheer her on as Best Bitchmare Ever.
9069845 Rainbow Dash is practically taking over Cadance's job! Next thing you know, Rainbow will start driving the foal delivery truck.
How is Rainbow okay with this? Or rather, does she know this at all?
Hope this fic doesn’t turn into a mother-daughter-preggo-competition scenario...
9072428 Right now? Rainbow Dash has no clue what he parents' sex lives are like. And no, I don't plan any such silliness. Besides, Rainbow Dash is getting pretty close to "popping"
I *really* hope this doesn't backfire on Bow and company!
9099157 Me too!
Oof wonder what Bow wanted-
Can’t wait for next chapter tho :3
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You know, for a moment I thought all Bow wants is to
ohoh-ahahbefriend Spitfire, seems like that's not the case. Despite all these kinky scenarios he's at least still loyal to Windy.....9119221 His particular kink is revealed in the next chapter, which I am writing RIGHT NOW BECAUSE MY PATRONS MADE ME!
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Uhhh...pls tell me it doesn't involve direct contact between him and Spitfire....
9119335 You really want me to spoil?