Pinkie Pie has lived with The Cakes for many years, and they couldn't be happier to have her.
And Pinkie Pie loves being with them, they've been super supportive of her, and even considered her as part of their family.
So when Mr. and Mrs. Cake's anniversary is fast approaching, the pink party pony finds herself facing a dilemma. She wants get something special for the Cakes, something that'll truly show them just how thankful she is.
But that soon proves to be a problem for Pinkie, because in her eyes, the Cakes have just about everything. And what do you get for ponies who have everything they could ever want?
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Great story! I'm giving this story its first like 👍! One minor note, this story is a bit heavy on the exclamation points. Other than that, great work!
Absolutely superb work on this one shot. The exchanges, characterizations and wrap-up are all quite well done in all the right places. I particularly liked Pinkie's flashback to her first meeting with the Cakes, the chats with AJ, Spike and Rarity AND the truly heart-warming final scene. :-D
This was short, sweet, and nice. I loved it!
Sometimes it is the simplest gifts that mean the most and I think that this story proved that point perfectly.
So sweet!
Speaking of family, what if on a special and unforgettable Apple Family Dinner each of the Apples invited somepony and/or somedragon over: Applejack invited Coloratura, Big Mac invited Sugar Belle, Granny Smith invited Grand Pear, and Apple Bloom invited the rest of the CMC, Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon and Spike over a hilarious and dramatic dinner party?
8710976 Well, all except Spike seem like probable dinner guests. But I think for the sake of simplicity just having everypony bring one guest and making Diamond Tiara Apple Bloom's guest would work.
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Honorary Apple Family members counts too.
Awesome story!
By the way, I noticed that you gave edited some people's stories, could you edit mine as well, please?
8745461 Depends, what do you want me to edit?
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Um...I have a pinkie pie story that is a train wreck that is 11,000 words long, but I don't know how to edit it. I'll see if I can put it in a Google Document tomorrow. ;) Could you please help me out since it is one if my first stories I wrote? If you can, please take how ever long you need for editing, I'm in no rush. If you can't, that's fine! :3
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/337992/mother-pinkie-pie
Thank you anyway,
Kiki03000
This isn't an email or a private message, why am I writing it like this?! XD