Firstly, you wouldnotget to hang out with your friends and listen to Maretallica rip apart your eardrumsliveat theThunderdome- something you were looking forward to for some time.
Secondly, you were going to be stuck with your bubbly and annoying sisterandyour drunk and emotional mess of a mother in a confined space fortwo straight weeks.
This already is an amazing start. Let's see where it goes next. *Puts into fetish/mother/son/incest box.*
And the long awaited story of Dust's is here! So far, your fears of a negative receptions seem to be unfounded, in my opinion. Apogee is her bubbly self, Jet and Delta are still jackasses towards each other, Delta's quite indifferent to her kids (so far)... yeah, the usual fare
And everyone is justified at being pissed - Delta for having this suddenly dropped on her, Ailly (yes, that name is cute, I'll stick with it) for having something he really looked forward to disrupted... well, Jet can't really be mad because he really should have known better than not to inform Delta. Or he honestly forgot - you never know what all can slip your mind when you are a CEO and already have a lot on your plate. Either way, that was a good way to start the story.
That last scene though... Ailly must be glad that Delta has a poor eyesight, she might have seen him ogling her otherwise
I've been hyped for this, and so far, I'm not disappointed at all. Definitely looking forward to more!
I, uh... I guess I should leave a comment too since all the cool kids did it. So, uh... yeah. I reall am enjoying this story. It was hella fun to proofread and I really can't wait to read more of it! Keep it up man!
8691276 Whoo! Awesome dude, glad it was enjoyable, hehehe. I had a lot of fun writing this, and I'm having fun planning out and working on future stuff for this. And yeah, there's a lot of lowkey anger between them all right now, Jet's got his company and two kids to deal with. Delta's had pmuch all of her plans ruined, and Aileron? Whew, poor boi.
And yes, his name is cute, hehehe I'm sure he is glad, who knows what Delta woulda done if she caught him Thanks!
8691470 I'm happy to have you on board dude, all of your help and Damien's was greatly appreciated! And glad you enjoyed it, thanks again!
8691708 Hehe, fair point, the thought did cross my mind, but it was too predictable. But thank you!
Thanks for reading guys! Stick around, we'll see another update either on the 31st or the 2nd of next month, depending
Is it weird I enjoy the arguing and character building leading up to the clop more in clop fics than the actual clop? Real talk....... I also enjoyed reading this!
8694034 Hehehe, I feel that makes a clop-story a lot better imho. There's build up and tension that ultimately leads to a decently written clop, makes it feel more real.
And I’m terribly late to the party. Sorry about that.
2nd person, anthro. That’s very different from what I’m used to, but I like this style so far.
I think this is the first time I’ve seen Jet start a fight with Delta, not the other way around. Could he be trying to tell us something?
The parents are still perfectly coherent to canon, how is it that everyone seems to nail them down so nicey? They could be walking out of the blog!
The “twin brother” idea intrigues me, the dynamic between Aileron and Apogee is easily what I liked best and what I’ll look forward to most in future updates. Smut will also be welcome.
that big happy family she dreamed about.
You tease
I’ll definitely make sure to see where this is going. Have a like and fav
8697618 Heheh, it's totally fine dude, there's no rush for anyone to read my stuff
Yeah, it's a new style for me to write as well. I've written anthro of course, but 2nd person is still a new avenue for me. So far it's pretty fun to explore.
Hmm... good point, and perhaps he could be, we'll have to wait and see. Hehehe.
I just studied them super briefly, looked at the pictures and some vague words on the trio, tried my best to nail them all down best as I can.
Ooohohoh trust me, this dynamic was fun to write out, I was a little nervous to introduce someone like Aileron into the Space Ponyos thing, but he seems to be pretty well received so far and I'm loving the characters and how they're coming out. I'm also enjoying the dynamic between Gee and Ailly, it's a nice change of pace from the normal stories that come out. And yes, smut will be very welcome, huehuehue.
RIGHT to the
fetishfeature box.8689892
Heading up there like a rocket ship~
Thanks for hopping on board the Crazy Train as well,
I'm not a big fan of anthro. Sorry
I like it.
8689988
>2 hooves
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MY DOOOOOOOOOOG!!!!!!
DUDE! THIS SHIT IS FUCKING LIT!
Apogee having a twin brother is so brilliant, and that last scene of him checking out delta
MORE!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!! I DEMAND MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Overall I liked it a lot.
Aileron seems like a pretty relatable teen and I suppose I can't blame him for staring at his mom's perky tits.
The fact this is anthro didn't bother me personally. Will be glad to see where things go from here.
This already is an amazing start. Let's see where it goes next. *Puts into fetish/mother/son/incest box.*
.... damn it cliffhanger....
And the long awaited story of Dust's is here! So far, your fears of a negative receptions seem to be unfounded, in my opinion.
Apogee is her bubbly self, Jet and Delta are still jackasses towards each other, Delta's quite indifferent to her kids (so far)... yeah, the usual fare
And everyone is justified at being pissed - Delta for having this suddenly dropped on her, Ailly (yes, that name is cute, I'll stick with it) for having something he really looked forward to disrupted... well, Jet can't really be mad because he really should have known better than not to inform Delta.
Or he honestly forgot - you never know what all can slip your mind when you are a CEO and already have a lot on your plate.
Either way, that was a good way to start the story.
That last scene though... Ailly must be glad that Delta has a poor eyesight, she might have seen him ogling her otherwise
I've been hyped for this, and so far, I'm not disappointed at all. Definitely looking forward to more!
I, uh... I guess I should leave a comment too since all the cool kids did it.
So, uh... yeah. I reall am enjoying this story. It was hella fun to proofread and I really can't wait to read more of it!
Keep it up man!
Making a story about Apogee's twin and not naming him Perigee. You dun fucked up.
I liked the story otherwise. Keep it up.
8689988
Eh, that's fine, not a lot of people are
8690179
Danke!
8690624
Hehehe, well I'm glad you like it so much! Stick around, another update is on the horizon!
8690918
Happy to hear, and yee, relatable indeed I more or less know what he's going through in a sense, so it's easy to do his character.
8691145
Awesome!
8691204
I'm the king of cliffhangers
8691276
Whoo! Awesome dude, glad it was enjoyable, hehehe. I had a lot of fun writing this, and I'm having fun planning out and working on future stuff for this. And yeah, there's a lot of lowkey anger between them all right now, Jet's got his company and two kids to deal with. Delta's had pmuch all of her plans ruined, and Aileron? Whew, poor boi.
And yes, his name is cute, hehehe I'm sure he is glad, who knows what Delta woulda done if she caught him
Thanks!
8691470
I'm happy to have you on board dude, all of your help and Damien's was greatly appreciated! And glad you enjoyed it, thanks again!
8691708
Hehe, fair point, the thought did cross my mind, but it was too predictable.
But thank you!
Thanks for reading guys! Stick around, we'll see another update either on the 31st or the 2nd of next month, depending
ugh second person garbage
Why write a literal character and then do second person
What I really like about this story is that I know absolutely NOTHING about this universe but I can edit it and enjoy it regardless.
Glad it got featured, it deserves it.
Daddy approves
8692141
"UGH why write something I dont like"
8692185
I'm really happy about that, dude, legit! Your help has been amazing so far!
Thanks buddy!
8692212
Hue~
Man at first I thought there would finally be some good female POV clop.
Oh, this is gonna be one HELL of a read...
I liked it a lot. I normally don't read things this long, but this was kinda hard to put down.
Hope to see some more soon.
8692592
Apologies friend
8692927
I hope so!
8693117
There'll be an update on the 31st of this month, so strap yourselves in folks!
Is it weird I enjoy the arguing and character building leading up to the clop more in clop fics than the actual clop? Real talk....... I also enjoyed reading this!
8694034
Hehehe, I feel that makes a clop-story a lot better imho. There's build up and tension that ultimately leads to a decently written clop, makes it feel more real.
Thanks!
Hey I'd be pissed at not going to a heavy metal concert too
8695056
Hehehe, same.
8695116
So in that regard I find this is the first 2nd person story I can mostly relate to
This is pretty good so far, would love to see more in the future.
8695123
Neat!
8695489
And you and the rest shall get more 31st of this month, there'll be an update.
8695731
Also
Excellent CinemaSins reference is excellent
Incest is wincest!
8695862
Unintentional reference it seems xD haha
8696535
Yes it is!
I finally managed to read this!
And I’m terribly late to the party. Sorry about that.
2nd person, anthro. That’s very different from what I’m used to, but I like this style so far.
I think this is the first time I’ve seen Jet start a fight with Delta, not the other way around. Could he be trying to tell us something?
The parents are still perfectly coherent to canon, how is it that everyone seems to nail them down so nicey? They could be walking out of the blog!
The “twin brother” idea intrigues me, the dynamic between Aileron and Apogee is easily what I liked best and what I’ll look forward to most in future updates. Smut will also be welcome.
You tease
I’ll definitely make sure to see where this is going. Have a like and fav
8697618
Heheh, it's totally fine dude, there's no rush for anyone to read my stuff
Yeah, it's a new style for me to write as well. I've written anthro of course, but 2nd person is still a new avenue for me. So far it's pretty fun to explore.
Hmm... good point, and perhaps he could be, we'll have to wait and see. Hehehe.
I just studied them super briefly, looked at the pictures and some vague words on the trio, tried my best to nail them all down best as I can.
Ooohohoh trust me, this dynamic was fun to write out, I was a little nervous to introduce someone like Aileron into the Space Ponyos thing, but he seems to be pretty well received so far and I'm loving the characters and how they're coming out. I'm also enjoying the dynamic between Gee and Ailly, it's a nice change of pace from the normal stories that come out. And yes, smut will be very welcome, huehuehue.
Tease indeed~
Danke danke!
Hey, I'm planning on doing a fanfic reading on this! I will provide full credit, but if you don't want me to just let me know.
Here is my channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCdA6IKQUrF9akkHRLGx-VNg
8698129
Oi Dust, update soon?
Neat chapter, poor family dynamics. Until later?