• Member Since 5th Aug, 2017
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I was taken away from the human, and now I live here with ponies, at least a can gain more LV and take over this damm world, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. (sees you) starting with you (blaster appears nd fires directly at you, your soul shatters).
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. (sees you) starting with you (blaster appears nd fires directly at you, your soul shatters).
LV GAINED
LV 57
Let's begin

Um.

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Also, having videos and/or images illustrating the story within the chapter is generally quite hard to pull off. There's a few stories every so often, but in most cases, the images are more of a chapter heading/footer than an actual illustration within the chapter.

As for videos, I've still yet to see a non-comedic story do well with videos embedded inside chapters.

Also,

https://m.

upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/9/97/M%26M_spokescandies.jpeg

First thing I thought of when I saw that random portion of a link sitting there.

Your soul is cracking trying to stay together but another gaster blast shatters it in two

Finally a Dusttale! I have been waiting for so long!

The concept is good, you just need to adjust the pacing of the story and maybe have an editor help you with grammar.

I ask of more plz, the story needs a bit adjusting that’s all
Anyway





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