Storm Quill is the first of his family to attend ANY form of magical schooling. He is determined to show his parents that his destiny rests outside of their small shop, and instead applies to Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns. Now all he has to do is make a noticeable impression on the examiners after some filly named Twilight Sparkle!
I didn't notice any typos, although I would change "larger destiny" to "greater destiny". Everything seemed a bit rushed, but overall it wasn't bad at all.
Good chapter cant wait for the next one.
This is about as sweet as cotton candy
I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!
Good chapter cant wait for more.
Dun dun DUUUUN?
Good Chapter cant wait for the next one.
Holy shit an update?
My prayers to tzeentch has been answered
Very interesting can't wait for more.
Praise be to tzeentch
I actually really like this too bad it has been so long since an update
I'm impressed. This story is rather straight forward but with some level of mystery of what's going on for Quill and his fellow dragon hatchers being the only students to pass the small selective entrance exam.