Rainbow Dash is raped on the night of the winter dance and the raper threats "If you tell anybody, I WILL destroy everything you know and love." What will she do?
8652747 8652723 8652758 Wow um thanks all of you for reading and thanks for the criticism really, I swear the next chapters won't be as bad and there will be somewhat of a happy ending and sorry for crushing your souls, I almost cried while writing this. God I am a messed up human being.
Hmm, there's nothing that breaks the immersion more than a big-ass red warning in the middle of the story. Hell, even a shower scene got a warning, though a black one. Your readers are not dumb, they probably read the description and know what they're getting themselves into (and if they didn't, then it's their fault), so don't treat them like they are.
Oof
Ow... My soul
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i was gonna comment something sad but your icon made me laugh how dare you
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Wow um thanks all of you for reading and thanks for the criticism really, I swear the next chapters won't be as bad and there will be somewhat of a happy ending and sorry for crushing your souls, I almost cried while writing this. God I am a messed up human being.
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Thanks for telling me that, really. I only did that for people who only want to se her reaction to it, you know? Well thanks again.
I'm curious to see where this goes.
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Well thanks I guess
I'm shook, how did you people find this?? xD
What???? maybe the next chapter would make sense??? who knows???? only the writer does?????
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Hopefully
Its a dark story so far, but I want to read the whole thing before I pass judgement.
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Thank you for not already putting a dislike, and it does get better. I am currently writing the next chapter.
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Wait your going to read the next chapter? And thanks for the constructive criticism, it really helps
Um.
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Yeah I don't blame you. Thanks for reading though
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Hmm, there's nothing that breaks the immersion more than a big-ass red warning in the middle of the story. Hell, even a shower scene got a warning, though a black one. Your readers are not dumb, they probably read the description and know what they're getting themselves into (and if they didn't, then it's their fault), so don't treat them like they are.
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Ok, I just didn't know, I'm gonna go back in and edit those out
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Muhuhaha im evil
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8653689 Next chapters been posted everyone that commented(If you disliked the story discard this comment)!
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HI BEST-FRIEND AMAZBOLLS BOOK KEEP WRITING!!!!!!! LOVE YA ;-)