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OliverSparkle


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When a young alicorn colt gets adopted by Shining Armor and Cadence and becomes friends with John Constantine who saved his life from a demon. Will this be the life that he was suppose to have?

And when Fluttershy finds a young scared colt in the Everfree forest all alone, can she be the mother he always wanted?

Some upcoming chapters were edited by Daisy Williams, I’ll tell you when the next chapters come

And some OC’s in this story were made by GunsNRoses365 which I have permission from before he left FIMFiction, I’ll tell you when they appear

Chapters (35)
Comments ( 104 )

Yo son, this be that pure, uncut cringe.

Awesome I like it!

When will you make the next chapter?

8671952
I’m writing it right now, not sure when it’ll be up though

8672148
I know Is just that this story is awesome and I love it!

8672221
Well I’m glad you love it, thanks :-)

8683698
Yeah that’s how many years it took for Oliver to become 18

8684415
When will you make the next chapter

8764631
I’m working on it still, just waiting for season 8 to come out and figuring out how chapter 5 should end before I do chapter 6

8765979
Did you see the new chapter of MLP Equestria Boy yet?

Maybe don’t describe it then have Constantine state the exact same thing e.g.
“he was in place called the Crystal Empire. He also some ponies in covered in crystal and some ponies that weren’t covered in crystal, he then saw ponies that can do magic, he even looked up and saw some ponies that can fly, the more he saw the more shocked he become.

“I’m in a land, that’s full of ponies, that can do magic, fly and some covered in crystal?!” He said in shock mode as he had never”
Just say I’m in a land full of ponies there is a few of these but still pretty good

I get a feeling that they'll come back for revenge.

8764720
Wait. if that has been 14 years. Then how come that flurry is still a baby?

9024100
They might do, they might not, you’ll never know

9026137
Are you going to make the next chapter?

9026720
I will, don’t worry

I just need more time to think how it should go, double read it and done

9026742
Ok. But one more thing. On chapter 4. If that has been 14 years. Then how come that flurry is still a baby?

9026830
Probably the same reason Screwball said to Mothball about Granny Smith still around but in baby form instead of old age

9026831
I don’t get it. I think

9026851
She’s probably stuck in an age time loop or something idk

9026853
How? That makes no sense

Neighsay is planning something, and I got a feeling that it is not good.

“Yes. Come back to Ponyville with us, and stay with me in my castle. We can help you get over your past and teach you a lot about friendship like we did with Starlight.”

said the crazy old lady who thought she was Twilight Sparkles

Oh boy. And that was awesome!

Please don’t tell that Oliver’s dead cause I’m freaking out!!

9250561
He isn’t, don’t panic

Now that was a sweet chapter :twilightsmile:

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