"Some people just need a high five....in the face....with a chair"
Adam watched as a comet crossed the sky, he went to sleep soon after, when he woke up he found he wasn't in his room and more importantly his body.
Nova watched as a comet crossed the sky, she went to sleep soon after, when she woke up she found she wasn't in her room and more importantly her body.
Two beings from completely different yet similar world's swap bodies
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Instantly thinks of that anime movie called "your name"
After a lot of deliberation about how I should approach what I've witnessed here, I've decided to just be blunt: I can't read a story with an absurd amount of run-on sentences, where you literally only see a period (outside of ellipses) at the end of paragraphs. Frankly, it's mind-boggling. If the punctuation is ever addressed, I'll come back and give reading this story another try.
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Yup.... -_-
I don't know what it says about me that I didn't even notice that every paragraph was one single huge sentence until I finished the chapter and read the comments...
Anyway it's interesting. Wonder if his/her friends are gonna figure it out.
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sadly we wont see what happens next...