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CrackedInkWell


"Inspiration does not come to the lazy. It only comes to those who call it." - P. I. Tchaikovsky

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Warning: The following story you are about to read is currently unedited and contains scenes of m/m shipping between two OC characters that are not my own and have gained permission for.


This story is my unique take on the famous fairy tale from the Brother’s Grimm of Rapunzel. In which the story is not about a girl with really long hair, a witch and a prince who finds her. This is my way of not only making fun of the story, but to swap out the characters for a unicorn with a birth deformity that has a really long mane, a mixed up creature with magical abilities, and a curious Changeling. So essentially, more or less the same tale only with a thicker plot and ponies.


Author’s Note: This story is a sort of Christmas gift to the wonderful Sekto the Changeling and his coltfriend whose really long hair has inspired me to write this, Dyron Peach. If there’s any chance that you two are reading this, I hope that you’d like my special gift.

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Someone took that picture at Disney.

Beautifully done...your story reminded of Timeless tales 'Rapunzel' with a tiny mix of disney's tangled(I think? curious to know the outside word) & beauty and the beast. there's two intro versions one by Olivia newton john and second is two kids walk up into the attic find a book as talking stuffed bear. in timeless tales the husband tell his wife about how he got food from an evil witch scarlotta. the witch comes to take the child they refuse to give her up, so she put a spell on them and fall asleep. about towards the end she turns the prince into a bird(unlike in the original tale where he's blinded by the witch.) he flies around looking for his love. she sings a song "Where do I start to say how I feel cause here in my heart where the feelings are real. if love will see us though and make our dreams come true. and we'll be together now and forever,we'll be together me and you" her tears turn the prince back to human and everyone lives happily after...except for the witch. thank you for bringing back some very special nostalgia for me:)
p.s: it was by Hanna-Barbera/hallmark & nest company(of "the original" swan princess trilogy) lastly hope your friends like the story you for them.

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