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The Truth

A girl's mind gone rampant can produce dangerous, and at the same time, wonderful things. A young girl, sad and depressed, imagines a world where everyone she knows is a cartoon. Ponies, to be exact. Our ponies.

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Chapter 1 · 20th Jul 2012 · 514 words
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Chapter 2 · 20th Jul 2012 · 472 words
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Chapter 3 · 20th Jul 2012 · 326 words
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Carpinus Caroliniana

Carpinus Caroliniana #1 · Jul 23rd, 2012 · · · Chapter 3 ·

It's a bit too fast paced but I like it. Equestria and her pony friends are warped versions of her real life.

Try slowing things down and writing "shifts" into her mental realm of Equestria and contrasting them with the real world.

RubberBrony

RubberBrony #2 · Jul 23rd, 2012 · · · Chapter 3 ·

This is pretty good.
I can't wait until the rest of her friends "get their cutie marks"

OmNomCookieCookie

OmNomCookieCookie #3 · Dec 11th, 2012 · · · Chapter 3 ·

Okay. I've decided to start doing this again. Wish me luck!

Unbridled Dolly

Unbridled Dolly #4 · Feb 13th, 2014 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Uhhhh... How was that an hour? Other than that slip-up, really good. The cutie mark thing is so... I don't know. Something good. But also bad. For Pinkie at least.

Unbridled Dolly