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You probably don't know him.

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Lyra loves Bon Bon more than anything else in the world. After living together for years, she knows everything about her marefriend. Well, everything except what her estranged parents are really like. Regardless, the one thing that Lyra is certain of is that she and Bon Bon are destined to spend the rest of their lives with each other.

Suddenly, Lyra is forced to deal with the most stressful situation she’s ever experienced. It’s all she can do just to keep herself together.

This is the worst possible week for her to meet Bon Bon’s parents for the first time.


This is a sequel to Lyra’s Journey and My True Self. It’s recommended that you read those two stories first in order to understand what’s going on in this one.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 30 )

That chapter was both melancholy and adorable. I am greatly enjoying!

what.....no please be okay Bon Bon

As cliche as it would of been, i was so waiting on Twilight to be out for a walk when Straight Lace went into that rant and slurred Lyra like that... just the mental image of Twilight responding made me smirk.

Great chapter.

A little blunt, but there's some pretty genuine emotions here.

this chapter made me cry happy and sad tears

Comment posted by Fullmetal Prime deleted Mar 8th, 2018
Comment posted by Fullmetal Prime deleted Dec 8th, 2017

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Lyra didn’t argue. “That’d be the Feather Down Inn,” she said.

I think I know what that's referencing.

No intentional reference there. I just needed to come up with a hotel name that sounded like it could exist in Ponyville.

this is absolutely beautiful. thank you

Lovely little ending you sure know how to write a romantic drama

Can't hang a iike on it twice, damnit! Shame... Good stuff, keep it up:pinkiehappy:

(BTW, I take it back about my private wishes for having Strait Lace receive a visit from a Standover Pony... :pinkiecrazy: Just syin'...-a

Yet another great story from Undefined, an underrated author! Thank you for this, I enjoyed it!

Neat.

I wonder if you can follow up on the other Lyra?

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I wonder if you can follow up on the other Lyra?

All of the outlines I have remaining in my series are about pony Lyra and Bon Bon. I wouldn't be averse to revisiting the human couple, but I haven't yet had any great inspirations for stories about them.

Still, since I've moved pony Lyra and Bon Bon a few years into the future, that means their human counterparts have gotten older, too. Where do I think they'd be...

After graduating high school, Bon Bon and Lyra immediately moved in together while Bon Bon attended business school (with the goal, naturally, of opening her own candy shop). Lyra never became as proficient at the lyre as her pony counterpart, although she does share her desire to find ways to create happiness in the world. While Bon Bon worked toward her degree, Lyra did her part by taking care of the apartment and finding assorted odd jobs in order to help pay the bills.

She's had a couple of jobs that she hoped she would enjoy enough to make a career out of them (working for Pinkie Pie's party-planning business, maintaining Walks of Life's presence on social media), but so far, she hasn't found the one thing that she wants to spend the rest of her time with. Other than Bon Bon, of course.

...Boy, that's not particularly uplifting. No wonder I've been paying more attention to the idealized pony world.

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Hmm... I always liked the idea that Lyra's Cutie Mark was for poetry or possibly song writing, something lyrical anyway. Or you could have Human Lyra interpret her talent differently, such as becoming a teacher (poems and songs were once used to record history and preserve knowledge), or maybe instead she reverses the roles, Lyra becomes the secret agent and BonBon stays the civilian. You have been keeping to canon in the background as far as I can tell. With the Equestria shorts and specials Human Lyra could be helping with that somehow. She did learn some magic after all.

Comment posted by hyacinthus deleted Jul 7th, 2020

“I wanted to say… when we were at the hospital… the things that I said… I… apologize.”

This hit me.

Dammit, I'm getting sucked into this story, I should be doing other things.
Your others about Lyra and Bon Bon have been amazing and this is totally on par. This chapter was about as expected from her dad but I can also feel there's plenty of other strong emotions swirling around here too and it's giving some pretty good feels..
But its sooo good...

One more chapter... :twilightsheepish:

Wow... What a way to spend a decent part of my day thus far. This story has continued to pull me in and not let go, its soo good. I just had to keep going till Bon Bon recovered as a seriously wanted to know what happened.

That impact...
Made me get all teary eyed there from the recent happenings in the story. Well done :pinkiehappy:

I hope Bon Bon simply goes along with her mare on tour, then they can have all the snuggles at night and neither one will be lonely and then Lyra will also play better too.

I'm not crying, but I'm also a filthy liar :fluttercry:

“Hon,” Applejack said in a no-nonsense manner that somehow still carried a note of tenderness, “ain’t nopony’d spend that much time bringin’ you up if deep down, they didn’t love you.”

Deep down perhaps, deep, deep down.

As they walked away, her mother said, “We tried to get in touch with you. But when we did, the Royal Guard said they couldn’t tell us where you were. Even though we were your parents. I kept trying, year after year, but they kept giving me the same answer. Then, after the fourth year, they said that they didn’t have any record of you anymore! We didn’t know what happened to you! We thought you had died!”

Well! Not nearly so grim as I thought! Maybe, I hope.

“The only mistake,” he said, getting up from his chair, “apparently was thinking that the Support Corps would work. It looks like I should have taken more drastic steps to put an end to this unnatural behavior.”

Wellllllllll fuck.

P.S. You don’t need to buy a gold chain. I have one that I’d be honored to let you have when you come visit.

If Bon Bon doesn’t do it by the end of this story, I’m gonna cry

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Finished this chapter, and I am happy

“…Your husband already tried asking the doctor about that, didn’t he?”

Sugar Plum looked back up. “It isn’t the first doctor he’s asked.”

Great, now I’m imagining someone asking a doctor to cure homosexuality, which I am fairly certain is completely impossible.

The Cakes confirmed that they would be able to create a wedding cake for the appointed date. And Lyra and Bon Bon already knew that Pinkie Pie would say yes. She would have been able to plan everything in a week’s time, let alone in multiple months’ time.

Of course pinkie could, she’s pinkie pie.

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