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Masterweaver


Just an average insane brony, doing average insane things. Professional Fanfiction Writer and Purveyor, relevant links are on my profile page.

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This story is a sequel to Winds of Change


Lyra and Bonbon are two normal happily married mares, except one isn't a mare but a shapeshifting hermaphroditic erovore whose mother just invaded Canterlot and the other is a highly unstable mare in heat with an absolutely brilliant plan.

...well, they're happily married, anyway.

Join Lyra and Bonbon as they navigate the wonders of interspecies pregnancy*. Or don't! It's not everyone's cup of tea, and there's a super hero movie in theatre five!

*Including random ponies touching their belly, well meaning bedroom advice from bakers, odd food cravings, morning sickness, cultural misunderstandings, morning sickness, big dramatic fights, random cravings for cardboard, gaining weight, lynch mobs, morning sickness, awkward godmothers who try too hard, patching up feelings, cravings that are downright disturbing, morning sickness in the afternoon, morning sickness, moodswings, pulled medication, bricks thrown through windows, lawsuits, surprisingly intense bedroom activities, dress up, shopping, royal visitations, morning sickness on princesses, kicking foals, more moodswings, mothers who move in to help out alongside their BDSM masters, random periods of glowing, even more moodswings, depression, hyperventilation, dramatic break-ups, internal bleeding, trying to outrun trains, robbing a convenience store, being thrown in prison, having odd cravings for prison food, false labor alarms, morning sickness at night, morning sickness in dreams, dramatic make-ups, numerous hospital visits, and a pair of guards named Lace and Arsenic.

(Cover Art provided by Conicer)

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 571 )

"You think it's heartless to care about my wife?!" Bonbon roared. "If the baby comes out fine then fine, but until it does it's just a potential and I am not sacrificing the pony who I love for somepony who I've never met!"

This. This is one of the best expressions of love I've seen so far.

Also, Bon Bon is being very level headed here :-P

Just those two guards names is enough to know I want to read this! ALLONS-Y!

You should have made the author's note at the beginning, lol. (Even though I knew it would have spoilers, lol.)

Huzzah for Aunt Dashie! :yay:

Oh my holy fuck this is amazing you're my new favorite person ever.

Well, I've read a serious pony-changeling pregnancy fic. I guess it's time I read a comedic pony-changeling pregnancy fic. Getting the feeling this is a sequel though, what with the secret-queen Rainbow Dash.

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Well, this looks like fun. Time to see what insanity it will inevitably lead to. :rainbowlaugh:

4954315 Yeah, that is why the first line of the description says "This story is a sequel to Winds of Change". :derpytongue2:

At the risk of sounding cliché (and horribly butchering proper language):

Dis gon be good. :pinkiehappy:

4954912 That's an awful lot if morning sickness :twistnerd:

Why not more?

4956760 more morning sickness obviously makes everything better

One does not simply write a sequel to an incomplete story.

Comment posted by Shadow Lance deleted Sep 5th, 2014
Comment posted by Warrior Kitten deleted Sep 5th, 2014

Ew!!!!! Girls don't marry and have babys!!!
What were you thinking!!!!!!:twilightangry2:

Jumping ahead with a sequel eh? Sort of takes a bit of the fun out reading future WoC chapters now that we know RD reconciles with herself and friends, somehow becomes a rouge(?) queen, and leads (causes?) a split or civil war with the main hive. Yet now there is enough peace where there is no threat from other changelings, only bigot ponies.

But even so, the premise for this fic is amusing enough, provide more regular updates are doled out. Hint hint.
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Bon Bon in this case has only adopted a female persona. This fic's canon is that drones are hermaphrodites. So genetics aside, there's no physical issue. And seeing how both Lyra and Bon Bon have been going at it for some time, the only issue is with the reader's personal viewpoints.

Trust that I will be there for you, that you will be there for me.

So... believe in the Lyra who believes in her?

In any case, this looks like it's going to be a very interesting story, especially going by the rather spoilery disclaimer. Still, can't say I didn't know what I was getting myself into. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

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Masterweaver posted the final chapters of Winds of Change on their Patreon account. We peons who don't pay it don't get to see the ending of Winds of Change apparently.

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I recall you making a blog post saying you were going to do so a couple months ago.

As a reader who's still eagerly awaiting the conclusion of "Winds of Change" and one who has a natural aversion for spoilers I don't personally go seeking out myself...could've really used that author's note at the beginning of the chapter. :twilightoops::facehoof:

That said, this isn't normally the sort of fanfic I'd read, let alone follow, but now you've got me curious to see how this turns out, so...yeah. That happened. :rainbowlaugh:

So, um...
How exactly does this work, the sequel being out before the previous story is finished?

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And yet the fact remains there's a blog post saying "I'm putting the last four chapters up on patreon." It's kinda hard to take that any other way given what Patreons is. And we have seen nothing of said chapters here. And sorry but I'm not offering up money on patreon to confirm if they're there one way or another.

Edit: Actually I guess I don't need to. Masterweaver already did that for us.
http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/338660/patreon-confirmation-winds-of-change-is-up

So it's there but not here. Rather like I expected.

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Um. I meant I was putting the whole confirmation thing. You know, the thing where I said "Hey, when the chapters go up I'll wait a couple of days to put the payment on Patreon."

You want me to delete my patreon account? I'll do that.

Comment posted by WorldWalker128 deleted Sep 5th, 2014

uhh you could make that spoiler alert in up author notes instead of down one ;p

4958301 ...That pun was bad, and you should feel bad. Bad. Bad bad bad. *hits you with a rolled up newspaper* Now go think about what you've done.

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I think that brings me up to...6, now. 4 more and I can get a free yogurt!

4959852
No, it's not like that at all. It is a reward, not a demand. I don't force money from my fans, I accept money that is given. I'm just bad at communicating that.

4959852 Pill is shamelessly lying. Patreon is essentially a tip jar.

Including random ponies touching their belly, well meaning bedroom advice from bakers, odd food cravings, morning sickness, cultural misunderstandings, morning sickness, big dramatic fights, random cravings for cardboard, gaining weight, lynch mobs, morning sickness, awkward godmothers who try too hard, patching up feelings, cravings that are downright disturbing, morning sickness in the afternoon, morning sickness, moodswings, pulled medication, bricks thrown through windows, lawsuits, surprisingly intense bedroom activities, dress up, shopping, royal visitations, morning sickness on princesses, kicking foals, more moodswings, mothers who move in to help out alongside their BDSM masters, random periods of glowing, even more moodswings, depression, hyperventilation, dramatic break-ups, internal bleeding, trying to outrun trains, robbing a convenience store, being thrown in prison, having odd cravings for prison food, false labor alarms, morning sickness at night, morning sickness in dreams, dramatic make-ups, numerous hospital visits, and a pair of guards named Lace and Arsenic.

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"Lyra, you're twenty six."
"An old maid--! Oh, Bonbon, you're my wife and you can help me, please please help me!"

Was that a Pride and Prejudice reference? Nice!

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