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Prismfire Productions

Prismfire Productions #1 · Nov 27th, 2017 · 2 · ·

I swear to Celestia there NEEDS TO BE A SEQUEL

Leviathan Jaeger

Leviathan Jaeger #2 · Nov 27th, 2017 · 1 · ·

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There will be at some point in the future.

bjorn2345 #3 · Nov 27th, 2017 · · ·

grammar up plox

BoredAuthor817 #4 · Nov 27th, 2017 · 4 · ·

I was half expecting someone to walk in on them...

Firesight #5 · Nov 30th, 2017 · 2 · ·

Not bad, but could use a editing pass. You’re using “your” in place of “you’re” a lot. If the words “you are could be substituted there, use “you’re”.

Still, that’s just a quibble. Have an upvote.

RealisticallyLogical

RealisticallyLogical #6 · Mar 10th, 2018 · · ·

Sequel pls?

Leviathan Jaeger

Leviathan Jaeger #7 · Mar 17th, 2018 · · ·

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Oh don't worry, I have a few surprises in store for the sequel.

Sunset Awesomness17

Sunset Awesomness17 #8 · Apr 6th, 2019 · · ·

Ooh! Loved this one!

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