Under the Stars

This story is a sequel to Why me?

It's been a hair over a year, and Twilight and Tempest's relationship is as strong as ever. Tonight, Tempest has something special planned. She has the perfect location picked out, she got Luna to agree to a special nighttime display, and she even has a ring. All that's left is for Twilight to say that one magic word.

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Satto Kez

Satto Kez #1 · Nov 23rd, 2017 · 1 · ·

Short and sweet.

These are still quite good. Hope to read what the future may hold for them.

mycarhasaMoustache

mycarhasaMoustache #2 · Nov 24th, 2017 · · ·

This is adorable. Im really enjoying your work.
Cant wait to see what you do in the future.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #3 · Nov 24th, 2017 · · ·

Wait, Tempest Shadow has a character tag? Do other characters from the movie have character tags too?

Captain_Cosmos

Captain_Cosmos #4 · Oct 5th, 2019 · · ·

Why isn’t this tagged with romance? That’s basically the main reason this story exists.

Evil Paladin

Evil Paladin #5 · Jun 25th, 2021 · · ·

She stopped just shot of Twilight and set the present down.

Should be "short".

Twilight just stood there, mouth agape in shock, for what felt like an eternity while her brain processed what she had just been asked. When she came out of her shocked stated, Tempest looked defeated.

Should be "state"

"Ok, this is crazy, even for one of your freak outs," Tempest said, "And I can't rightly spill my secrets when I'm about to black out from all the blood rushing to my head."
"Then you best hurry," Twilight said, sitting down with a smirk on her face.
Tempest knew there was no way Twilight would let her actually get hurt, so she decided to feign blacking out. She let her whole body go limp

Blood getting forced to your head would cause a "red out". It causes your vision to redden and a headache as the blood vessels expand painfully.
A black out is caused when not enough oxygen is making it to your brain. Happens when your getting choked, or under high-G flight maneuvers where blood is pushed out of your head.
You pass out with a black out, not with a red out.

TheOneAJ