Four All The Right Reasons

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Sometimes, Rarity loves Rainbow Dash; other times, she is incredibly frustrating. Not that Rarity would ever admit any of this, of course. After all, how could a tomboyish athlete love a frou-frou seamstress?

Cute RariDash for the bestest person, Fourths.

Cover art by xenon.

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FamousLastWords #1 · Nov 20th, 2017 · 2 · ·

"Eh. I'm no good at that kind of stuff. I'll go and smile for some photos and shake a few hooves, and then eat ten plates of all the good stuff and take a nap."

Food and a nap? I'd say any event where you can accomplish those two things is time well spent.

Now, as far as the fic goes, it was really cute! I feel like the "date reveal" segment seemed a little awkward, but at the same time, there's only so much you can do in the course of a one-shot.

I really enjoyed Rarity's characterization. On point. Rainbow's was good, too. Loved the "fake paws" joke. But, it almost seemed out of place for her to just suddenly notice how attractive Rarity was. But, then again, only so much space to work with.

Oh, one more thing, I loved the season 1 throwback to them always being nude.

Great job, man.

FloydienSlip