Why isn't there a sex and/or a gore tag?

because there isn't any sex its just a rumor false same with the murder

Awful story.

8578594
what do you mean awful

8578599
Don't listen to him. He's a troll

Author's note: from here on Rhyme is referred to as a girl.

This was supposed to be at the bottom in the authors note section.

Twilight and Rose return to the others. Soon as Twilight was close enough she says “ girls I have something to tell you. I'm actually a Pony princess from a magical land called Equestria. The reason I need to win the Fall Formal is that the crown is part of a magical defense and without it, the others don't work. That also explains why Rose is now a female. When she fought Sunset she broke for rib and it punctured a lung. Sunset threw her through the portal. The other three princesses of the land decided to save her. However all the way down to their DNA. Rose after recovering hurried back to us.”

Should've had you write this as Pinkie saying it so it would be more movie accurate.

Otherwise great chapter

8578634
well this is an alternate universe story so that is why i did it that way. as for the AN i put it there so people wont get confuse by rhyme being called rose and referred to as a girl

8578647
I guess that works.

Also ignore Hamster. He likes to harass people he don't like

8578629
i won't

8578594
Look, I know we haven’t gotten along very well but can you please not criticize this writer? This is my friend’s friend and I really don’t want them to be terribly criticized. Just please don’t give this writer a hard time.

8578667
thank you for that

8578672
No problem. Speedy is a friend of mine. A friend of his is mine as well. Just remember that others opinions don’t matter. It’s yours that count. Don’t ever forget it.

8578676
thank you for the advice ill take it to heart

8578680
I got your back

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8578629
Do I know you randos?

8578667
Ummm tyou do know this is acopy of another story. Here on thsi site right?

the theme, the story line. It's the same only small differences and not very well written, it a nearly a full blown copy of the orginal story. don;t beleive me I'll fidn the orginal as its on my favs and tracking.

Unless there was permission given to write a copy of the orginal.

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I know that story you are thinking of and this one isn't a copy of it for this story is an Equestria girls version of a story I wrote called Roses Broken Soul, however, the story your thinking of did inspire me to write this story along with mine. ps I'm pretty sure the story you are talking about is Finding a Place