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I wasn't always a slave. Hell, I wasn't always a outlander. Fate is fickle like that. What's that? Several raiders are coming for me? *Sigh* let's make this quick.

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Well let's see where this goes :moustache:

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Thank you. Will probably have chapter 2 out later today. I hope to see you read it.:twilightsmile:

Well, still curious to see where this goes so.... tracking :twilightsmile:

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Didn't expect the Enclave to seem to be the good guys, did you? Chapter 3 Will be posted either later today or tomorrow. :twilightsmile:

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No i did not, and i am still extremely suspicious about them in this story, they are afterall being just a bit to helpful for me to not suspect them :trixieshiftleft:

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They're a republic (presidential dicatatorship as of rn for a pretty good reason). Once you see Chapter 3, you'll find out how they came to be in this wasteland. Slight spoiler: This story takes place 3 years before Littlepip leaves her Stable. Yay, prequel fic (kinda)

Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?

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What do you mean by this? There will be heavily sexual scenes, but no sex scenes unless there is popular demand for it.

Now i am just getting curious about their names and why there so different :applejackunsure:

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Does being to lazy to go on a MLP name generator and throwing in a few references count?

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Anyways, what did you think of the chapter itself? Also, chapter 4 will probably be out today or tomorrow.

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I am not that good at reviews or explaining my thoughts.
So i will leave it as, "you have my attention, the names are still a little confusing, and things are moving along a little fast but i am interested" :twilightsmile:

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I'll slowdown by chapter 5. There isn't much to describe because, y'know, desert. The fast is supposed to represent the current thing happening. Just 2 days ago, Shadow Flower ran from slavery and now, she's a part of the Enclave Republic. She is a slave on the run, however, and if one knows something like that, then you know they must live a somewhat fast paced life.

Anyways, I hope to see you continue to comment on this story and hopefully, chapter 4 will be to your liking.:twilightsmile:

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