I can't help but feel like this title has more than one meaning

I'll be back to add my review when I've finished reading.

"First!"

(Though I'm kind of cheating since I'll have to wait until later tonight to read it.)

Always great to see a new content drop from you. Here's to hopefully a good year ahead.

Good to see you doing well again, Holy. Keep at it.

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Damn ninjas got me
Boomer on a phone keyboard
It's the way of things

Unexpected! But very welcome!

~Skeeter The Lurker

Well look who's back in action! It's good to see you still kicking

*reads title*
Seems legit i'mma read it then

Holy Moly! A Holy story...I’ll see myself out.

I hope this is a prequel to this story

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/258370/scratch-one-off

Circling back now and having read the two chapters, I can say I'm feeling it with the start here. The characterization is good, and the scene setting carries a strong atmosphere, especially with the little touches like the 'guitar pick challenge'. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.

Well I'm hooked on this now. Can't wait to read the rest of this story keep it up.👍

This is good. I don’t see why it needs to be a mlp fic, but I’m not going to complain about it.

I adore this story.

I want nothing more for these two kids to get together and make it.

Oh man. I have a bad feeling I might start to like this more than the Sunset Shimmer ones...
@Holy: Am I a traitor if I do...?

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Yes.

Hmm, but has the main character ever thought of a trade school? Working in the mechanical field? Apprenticeship?

This story hits too close to home, I know too many people with the closed minded ‘Must go to college, MUST work in an office’ type mentality...

Away from that, I adore this story. I can’t wait to read more and I’m going to check out your other work now!

I'm already hooked on this story. Awesome work!

I can’t help but feel like I’d like this just a bit more if it weren’t second-person, but honestly I was noticing it so little by the end I’m not sure it’d actually make much difference. The narrator feels a lot more fleshed-out than the typical second-person cardboard cutout, is the thing.

It’s so very sweet so far, though! The characters have so much personality, it’s done wonders to make them endearing and likable. Definitely hoping to see more of this

Why does her name have to be Vinyl Scratch and why did you post this human story on a pony fan fiction site?

more, MOAR I NEED MORE OF THIS!

no seriously though nicly done dude following this story and watching it for as long as possible.

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Well I still believe that is one of the best Sunset Shimmer I've enjoyed (with no offense to the others, I just enjoyed that "series" so much) but I need some fulfilment from/for Vinyl after reading Scratch One Off. Forgive me

this is looking great so far. I was a little skeptical while reading it since it doesn’t really take place in a MLP location. But that is outweighed by this compelling story that you have provided for us and i will look forward to more of your awesome chapters to come 😁. Keep up the amazing work Holy we all love you

now the question is will this end happily or will it end terribly. I can’t wait.

I loved these kinds of fics before, I saw them all die incomplete. A few gems were able to finish and I hope this turns to one of them.

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I'm not noting this to disparage, just pointing out something that may have been overlooked, since I found the several comments on this point a bit head-scratching. The story is tagged as Equestria Girls, and in the second chapter, it specifically mentions that both of them attended CHS. So it's set in-universe, just a good number of years after the events of the canon show.

"You go to high school here in Canterlot?"

"Yeah, actually. CHS. Graduated about eight years ago now I think."

"Dang... just missed you. I just got out four years ago."

Gonna throw this on my RiL and probably won't see it again :(

definitely throwing this on the Tracking list

This is an amazing story! I hope it continues

Absolutely loving this so far!

Looking forward to more chapters, It's a more sad-ish and dark story but that's the beauty of it ain't it?

Seems super awesome so far! Can't wait to see more

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z1oB2EDu5XA

<3