What happens when someone breaks their limit, what if they want to go even farther? In Rainbow's case, she went beyond anything she could even think to accomplish, but it will take time for her to understand. She has help but the actions she will take will decide more then just the safety of Equestria but the fate that bind their world to many. Rainbow will learn great things, important lessons, she is the first to enter this realm, but she will not be the last to explore.
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Well this was a sudden decision, originally i have been working on a few other stories but nothing ready yet to put down, so this thought came around and the first chapter i had laid down in my mind was quick enough to accomplish without becoming too long. This is technically my first published pony story and welcome all comments, critics and suggestions, hope you have fun reading. why i write? I writie pony-fics because i want to give something back to the fandom for giving me so much happyiness.
have a good day!
A hallway, eh? I guess that could be one interpretation. I interpret it as being just the stars, the only way to navigate is by instinct.
And the first place you go to is also influenced by Faust. Is this going to be a trend, or just random?
great story, has a great idea behind it. are you just going to have it just be with the PowerPuff girls, or are you going to have it include other universes too?
@SRG
Thanks for your thoughts! For the name, i was thinking along the lines of something symbolical and almost literal, and the 'fourth wall' is something i've been wanting to test and prod at.
@AppleTank
Yes, a hallway/corridor is one interpretation, but not the only one, as its a place that changes from time to time, expect variations in the future.
@Radpro
There WiLL be others, not all are directely related but won't be anything repetitive, it won't have to be a faust tweaked piece since there are only so many she had a hand in (but will attempt), so i will try to keep this related to mlp and to other worlds that could be pitted against. HOW exactly the interactions between the worlds will progressive and be consistent light so as not to make this story a 'anythinggoesbecausePinkyPie'. To end ths comment of H[iGH appreciation, i will give a hint: Remember, there are many doors, and doors swing BOTH ways...
Thank yo all who read this story and leave comments, agan thank you all
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Hmm. More wall breakers, eh?