This story is a sequel to The Price of Being the Hero
After Shinng Armor saved her life from a special needs colt whom she bullied to the edge, she now has to reflect on her actions durning her indefinite grounding. No longer able to do as she pleased, as well as now being stuck babysitting her hero’s baby sister while he serves detention, will her time allow her to reflect on what a selfish bitch she has been? And what it actually means to be a princess? And why can’t she stop thinking about Shinng Armor? No mater how much she makes it up to him?
This story dose take its own liberties, as the original story was written before I had read the comics.
My contribution to 2017 national writting month.
Cover by ParadigmPizza may replace it down the line
Why would Cadence bully someone?
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Because she a spoiled brat and doesn't care whos he hurts, or treats others.
That what she was like at first. she was bad if not worst then Blue Blood.
this one could use a tad more time in the oven, I see some strange little things like "(friend)" left in as a placeholder.
I'm loving it
, keep it up 
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Dry heave.
Great chapter
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Read the first story. This version of Cady grew up spoiled. Like, pre-CMC Diamond Tiara spoiled.
Still great
I'm really liking the ideas you have in this story. Cadence as a teen bitch is very fun to read abd imagine.
However... you desperately need to proof read your work more. At a bare minimum, copy paste your work into word or similar and go through the work with a spell checker. It'll get rid of some of the more blatant errors (typos, "I" not being capitalised, etc.). Won't help with the use of wrong words (e.g. it's "Lose" and "Loser", not "Loose" and "Looser"), but it's a simple way of dealing with some of the more obvious errors. Also worth reminding yourself of where you use "There", "Their" and "They're".
Those are the biggest issues I see. Fix them and it'll make the story much more pleasant to read. Which will make your wonderful characterisation that much more fantastic.
Now I know I'm not the only one with that goal. Well, except for seeing it through even if it kills me...
Also, great pair of stories! Even if you failed National Writing Month, which I never even heard of until reading this, I'm still enjoying this story!
could really use an editor but still fun to read
Great Chapter
, nice "origin story" for "The Dance" 
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, I was just reading again after sometime away from reading fics. Just commenting to let you know that this is one of my favorites in the whole site. Believable and unique "origin story" to Shinny & Candance relationship.
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it has been awhile ^^’ and while I certainly hadn’t forgotten this one (that meaning I’d be more likely to finish this than Silver life or Elsa’s snowdrop -/-) I’m atm focused on a new story I had the motivation to write, but may come back to this sooner since I do still have some game plan and not much left to tell
Why thank you
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, just knowing that this story may continue eventually makes me happy 
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Meanwhile, if you enjoyed this, I’d highly recommend some of my other stories such as Buttons Date or Farmer and Mermaid while you wait
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Ok