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A polite gun owner. Just don't tread on me.
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Interesting.... not bad, not bad at all... do you have any plans to make a sequel to this?
Originally, we did think about having Sunset Shimmer as a follow-up. But that was just a thought. Now we're just making this into a full story with more explicit details involving environment, which we didn't focus much on this one.
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That could be interesting... what if this went a step further? Like say, after she becomes Midnight Sparkle she forces her virtual world to become a reality? And the Humane Six have to stop her?
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Pretty interesting stuff right there. I'll have to think on that.
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Do you by any chance take requests? I can PM you a few interesting ideas!
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It kinda de[ends. send me what you want and we'll talk about it from there.
it's good, but I was expecting a story where having power showed her how evil we can really be. instead, it seems to be some evil trying to corrupt her, and it doesn't even make much sense, it doesn't try appealing to her, it is just making blunt statements and she just seems to go along with them, like she never had morals or anything. I came here for the sex and spike tag, thinking she would do terrible things like rape someone or order a mutilation, but now it just seems boring. just her deciding to send people to the dungeons, no hidden desire to do terrible things with her own bare hands.
sorry if it sounds like i'm just ranting because i didn't get what i want but it just seems generic and uninteresting
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It's understandable. This was our first time doing something like this together and we needed some feedback on how it looked, what you said being the main case of it.
We'll take this with the others for the full fledged story we're planning on making soon.
By the way, it's greatly appreciated that you took the time to tell us. We got users saying it's good, but I always second guess myself because I've never done something like this before.
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Give it a chapter or two. Maybe this "reeducation" is what you're looking for.
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thanks for being understanding, i love to give my opinion when i think it might help
so in his systems. does that mean twilight programmed spike to help make her evil
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Spike is Twilight's system Artificial Intelligence that's there as a guide. As the story progresses, He is only there to give suggestions and advice in terms of a 'little brother', but leaves the decisions for her on what she wants to do.
This ending doesnt really do it for me. am neutral minded on the story, i hope you write more. its interesting
This was interesting, and it has some potential. But i think it’d have a little more impact if the Rainbooms were somehow in the simulator. Maybe she met them and wanted to add them? IDK. Just felt like they were missing.
And the guard captain? Could’ve sworn it was Shining Armor and not Dusk Shine.