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Fluttershy was never a fan of Nightmare Night. The spooks. The frights. It was far from her cup of tea. Rainbow Dash, however, enjoyed the holiday and one Nightmare Night wanted her mate, Fluttershy, to enjoy it as well. And with some convincing she was able to get Fluttershy to agree to go with her for some Nightmare Night fun. The only catch was that Rainbow Dash had to make sure the poor fragile pony wouldn't get spooked. A job only made harder by some weird behaviour around the town..

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Sneaking in before the deadline, eh?

Well done!

Time for me to get reading.

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Yupyup. I'm terrible at this thing called time management. x3

Luckily I write fast so it wasn't too much of an issue. But still had to put in the effort to try to make it great~

I'm not a BIG FlutterDash fan but I'll admit a few fics have peeked my interest. This being one of them. I especially liked the ending with the inflated Pinkie head and megaphone.

FLUTTERDASH 5 EVER!

Congratulations! You got third place in the fourth FlutterDash contest! The post can be found here; I sent you a PM with the prize details.

Seems sneaking in right before the deadline paid off after all. :raritywink:

Thank you for participating in the contest, I appreciate it. If you have any questions about the feedback I gave you, just ask. :heart:

Awww this was so cute and funny! I love how Rainbow is so protective of Fluttershy and worried about her being scared, but also needs the comfort and reassurance herself when she feels like she’s failed - you did a great job of showing the different sides of her personality here. The comedy was all on point too, it was fun how all the others played their part to scare Dash back in their own way, and I loved the ending, truly Pinkie Pie with a megaphone is the most terrifying thing of all XD it felt very true to all the characters and the spirit of the show and I really enjoyed this, wonderful job :yay: :heart:

Debatable if a megaphone or a Monster energy would be worse.

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