Tempest has been granted a room in Celestia's castle for the time being until other arrangements can be made, and to keep her from falling back into solitude. When Tempest admits to Twilight that she hasn't seen many of the things ponies have already seen in their lifetimes, Twilight wants to help change that, and more.
Does she means after or before Twilight went to them?, because sometimes I think they act like they know stuff they can'T know.
Either I forgot about something, or this is some new theory/comic stuff that I maybe won't like.
oh, nice that she is mentioning it, because Luna usually does it anyway in other stories.
hhhhmm nothing special so far, but it started nice.
Mind your tenses; you've got a few shifts from present to past and back again.