Winter time brings about the frigid cold and, in Ponyville, this may be the coldest winter in a long time. Bright Sight is Ponyville's newest resident and he aims to settle down in the small town while concealing his biggest secret. Big Mac finds himself with a lot of downtime after the harvest season had just ended. Both stallions find friendship in each other and, perhaps, in time, it may grow into something even stronger, something that makes even the most freezing winter warm.
(Cover art was created and is owned by me.)
Chapters (11)
Tracking.
Bright Sight looks kinda like Night Light. Was this intentional?
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No, that wasn't intentional. Merely coincidental I suppose.
Like how this is going, I'll keep an eye on this
Okay so, this story contains one Macintosh Apple, a stargazing stallion that’s a psychic whose best friend is a ghost that follows him around, and it’s a romance between the two?
(Pulls up a comfy armchair.) Continue...
Howdy there! I wrote up a review of this first chapter as part of a thing I occasionally do where I review a couple of random stories from the New Stories section. You can read the review over here, if you like!
I read the fic about you doing it with your clone it's beautiful. so welcome back fimfiction! wonder if pinkie know bright sight's ghost friend know how random she is & on the account of this...https://youtu.be/682pneYoP0c
p.s: i'm so following you now:)
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Thanks a lot for the review! I'll try to take the criticism to heart as I move forward!
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Happy to hear that! You’ve definitely got potential, so keep at it!
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! Oh my gods the POTENTIAL!!!! I am loving this already!! And it has absolutely nothing to do with the fact that Gay Mac is best Mac. Nope. Uh uh. *Gets comfy and waits for next chapter*
Question on Bright: since his best friend is a ghost, does that mean that he can see other ghosts too? If so, I think there’s so much you could use from that trait.
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He can! I already have plans for using that.
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Is the next chapter coming along okay?
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Just a bit busy with finishing up this quarter of school. But I'll be back on with writing as soon as I'm done!
Really great writing. I look forward to seeing more from you :)
I'm heavily in the SugarMac camp these days, but oh my goodness this is adorable, and I'm rooting for Bright to get him in the end. Great work on this one! It's a great opener.
It's Alive!
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You better believe it, buddy~!
Very cute. I wasn't expecting the perspective to shift, but I like it!
Outstanding!
Glad to see another chapter, and you made a damn fine return with it!
Ayye, good story so far! It's rare for me to read stories so early on, I hate the suspense of waiting for the next chapter. That being said I'm glad I took this one up, it has a lot of potential! Can't wait to see more, man
One of my favorite things about your writing is the care you take with the little moments and actions during conversations. The dialogue is always engaging, and it makes me feel like I'm watching a movie. I still love the ghosts, too. That was a great choice.
I'll need to finish this one up later. I'm halfway through and loving it so far. Great work!
And now I'm all caught up! Great work. I love how you're pacing this story, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Thanks a lot!
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Curiouser and Curiouser.
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Shall we delve deeper down the rabbit hole?
I like where this is going. Great ending for this chapter!
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Thanks a lot! ^^
Another great chapter and I love the story your building here.
I can tell Big Mac is going to have a lot of questions for Bright.
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Thanks! The plot thickens!
i'm very late to the party for I didn't know you had updated this fic.
big mac might be crushing on bright and vice versa but he (bright) is afraid to fall in love with him...why is that?!
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You’ll just have to wait and see, my friend!
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okay then...aw that's nice of you to call me your friend.
hey I have request (it's not a commission!) so
https://youtu.be/Ezz3flnBldw
since I follow you;)
p.s: all my stories will have songs from musical theater in them. here's a taste of what to expect from me.
Oh gee willie!
You sure know how to keep someone wanting more from a story.
Outstanding work as always!
This chapter reminded me of a movie about a man who could see and talk to ghost and as soon as the ghost knew that they flooded to him and asked for help.
(Obviously not what your going for.)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Thanks, dude!
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No thank you for putting time into this awesome story!
Eeeeek, I love it!
Aww... Poor Bright.
This was another marvelous chapter. I love that the secret didn't turn into a huge multi chapter burden. The characters still feel very real and adult, which I appreciate immensely. Great work!
...and please let them have a happy ending.
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You bet! I’m really glad you’re still enjoying the ride!
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How's the next chapter coming along.
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It’s coming. With the holidays coming around, I’m not really too focused on writing, but the next chapter will be here when it’s ready!
To the author - How did I miss this one!?!
anyways onto the story...
me:*taps him on the shoulder* um bright mac i hate tell ya...wasn't speaking French!
lastly big mac confession to bs (bright sight) was so sweet then turns a complete 180 and it all goes downhill/ to hell.
oh god what's ivory gonna do is she going talk to princess luna use her power to enter big mac's dreamscape and tell the stallion off in order to defend her friend?
question - is the inspiration for sight's ability based on the tv show ghost whisper?
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Yeah, that’s exactly what inspired Bright’s power! Also glad that you’re still invested!
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*throws fist in the air*yes! because in ch.5 you mention bright being teased by other foals & I instantly thought of ghost whisper.
i'm just busy with things and sometimes forget about a certain fic until it hits me or find out randomly!
lastly why wouldn't i still be invested...it's a beautiful & original story.
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Is the next chapter coming along okay? It's been awhile.
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Still coming. I've hit a wall with some writer's block and I'm trying to write through it.
I think this story needs an au tag, since Mac is with Sugar Belle in canon.
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Well, you're not wrong! Thanks for the suggestion! I added the tag!
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