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I like the story so far but there's just a couple things that hold it back a bit.
1. Pacing: Whilst I despise a story that moves at a snails pace, this is moving a bit too fast. Vague I know but I just wanted to mention it.
2. Explanations: Those that don't play Warframe don't know what any of these weapons and abilities are, doesn't affect me cuz I been playing for two and a half years but it wouldn't hurt to stop and explain a bit here and there.
Otherwise keep doing what you've been doing!
Please continue
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I have to agree I only played a little bit of Warframe and many of the weapon names I don't know what they are without visiting the wiki. Same with the Tenno abilities as I never finished the main campaign, the Warframes abilities I know but that's about it.
Awesome beginning I like it. I don't read many crossovers but I definitely will like this one and follow the story's progress!
i Like it so far keep up the good job see you next chapter
lllloooovvveee iiittttt ~
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Agreed on the point on the warframe info. maybe have a little exposition to twilight in detailing from an in character view of the weapons and warframe.
more of this please cause i'm loving it thus far
He should have ran into Pinkie by now.
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You are still using it out of context. Yeah he is changing what happens in the show. But he does not know that. He does not know what will happen in the future anyway as per the show. Therefor any actions he makes or the fact that he was "destined" to appear there anyway means that nothing has changed as per this fics universe. You are implying that anything anyone does is the butterfly effect -which it technically is- but what happens is already set in stone. The effect is to be applied to changing history, like what Starlight did, she knew she was altering history. But you cannot alter a future that is set in stone. Or the fact that a person cant go back into to alter history anyway. Going to be honest, you added a theory that has no merrit in this context.
Bro I’m liking this
Update Boss? Gimme the update pls.
8559761 Update is coming soon, I got a couple of days to myself starting tomorrow finally x3
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Boss! We have received intel that reports you're almost at 300 followers!
Nice work! Heh, maybe next time you'll actually break a sweat entertaining people like this!
You're pretty good.
Does hydroid have any cosmetics, ketos, karkinos? Sure as hell can't be rakaam, someone definitely would have remarked about the giant overcoat frozen in time mid burning-to-ash