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It's 106 miles to the White Tail County Festival, they've got a truck full of apples, half a charge on their cell phone, it's raining, and they forgot their umbrellas.
Time to hit the road!
Rated Teen for language and mature subject matters.
Special thanks to SolidFire for his editing work.
Cover art by oDaefnYo
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I am SO friggin’ jealous of your writing.
Seriously, great job.
Woo! Rarijack! Love it!! And this was rather unique in its way of handling them, very nice.
That's some QUALITY Rarijack right there. God I'm such a sucker for that "sharing body warmth" trope
I felt that things sped up just a little too fast there at the end, in that I hadn't gotten the sense that Rarity was quite at the point of doing what she did. That said, the dialogue throughout was phenomenal. The conversations felt quite real, not too forced and just the right amount of dirty-mindedness for these two.
A little M rated there.
Very nicely written, though perhaps a bit fast with the Rarity suddenly wants to kiss her part.
Man, I really like the characterization on display here, right up until
hits and then my suspension of disbelief cracks like an egg.
Very nice!
The character interactions are great, and I think you got both of them in-character. These two have such a fun dynamic, and I could feel how frustrated they were both getting.
I did think the talking about cocks and dicks felt out of place, but I could get past it.
Gonna check out chap 2 now!
(PS- congrats on getting featured!
)
This was a sweet fluffy story with nicely written dialogues. The characters were also well-written and their personalities were on point. I appreciated the references to the show, but I just can’t be sold on RariJack as a couple. It’s a matter of personal preference. I like the dynamics between Rarity and AJ as an odd couple, but as friends.
Nice work but I feel it could have been longer and that Rarity was a little pushy but overall good work.
While I think the whole cock-talk thing was a bit out of character for Applejack, it was still damn funny
Let's see if chapter 2 is this good too
Would love to see what their friends say after they get back
Top shelf as usual, Commissar,
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Awesome job. Thank you for this fic
This was the best Rarijack I have ever read, and that's saying something. Sweet, sour, and sexy, just the way the pair should be!
Makes about as much sense as me asking you to judge a fashion contest.”
MLP Writers- Hmmm...ya know, thats not a bad idea for an episode. Lets do it!
... This was a fantastic read. It was cute and funny and, honestly... I could totally see it...
put it on the read later list just to remind myself to read this lovely piece again.
Given the description, I was hoping for a line in there like "we're on a mission form Maud."
Always worth another read.
You can has review!
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Oooo, nice! Thanks a bunch.
I'll admit, I do kinda wish there was a rating between 'Teen' and 'Mature' on this site. But... maybe I ought to re-visit its rating...
Came here from the review 10245427
This was a positively delightful story, thank you for it
how much i'm laughing
Read this again because Rune Soldier Dan's blog reminded me of it.
And it's just as sweet as I remembered. I still remember the "cock talk", but somehow forgot the part where they mention Rainbow Dash.
Like how emotional this is, and keep up the good work.
Until next time!
Writing was top notch! Atmosphere, both chilling and hot! I loved the direction and narration of the whole story. Not a sense of drought reading through and all. I can’t express into words on how delighted I was reading this!
As an AppleDash fanatic Im starting to understand why this dynamic has become a peak interest that I myself am now wanting to search more great fics of this pair! Solely from this fic alone!
Well done!~
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late reply but, I think the fact it would normally be out of character still works, perhaps even better than how we would expect her to respond.
I've known people who are fairly reserved and avoid saying things you wouldn't want your grandma to hear, and 9 times out of 10, they enjoy a little bit of time to "let loose" especially when they can get away with it by using inuendo. AJ in this scene gets an out to make a few jokes she'd never say in public because she finds a rarity of an opportunity where it's a casual 1 on 1 conversation with someone else who's mind is in the gutter at that moment.