It's never easy spending your whole life in a siblings shadow. Its a hundred times worse when your elder sibling is the Sun Goddess. Feeling dejected and forgotten Luna spends her nights in isolation. Until a certain Changeling walks into her life and changes everything. (Ambiguous relationship, platonic friendship and a light dose of angst.) A short 2shot.
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Chapters (2)
Break
Filly
Throw him out
Luna's
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Thanks for the feedback
8468495
Perhaps it may be because I follow British grammar rules which have a few differences from the way Americans use it but 'throw out' doesn't sound wrong in the context in which I implemented it. Care to elaborate the issue with my tense choice?
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You're welcome.
I'm sorry the first comment I posted was grammar errors.
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The scentce just fells like it is missing a word.
By the way. This is a really good story.
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Pony_Person_123
Thanks for the reply and feedback. I'll try to address the grammar issues with it and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
omg i know this is completed, but it is by far the best fic i have read! would it be too much to maybe ask for a sequel? i totally get it if your busy or whatnot! its just this was soooooooooo good!
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Thanks for the feedback. I'm really flattered and happy you'd call this the best fic you've ever read. Regarding a sequel its certainly not the last thing I intend to write on this ship (currently working on another one actually) but in time I do intend to write a follow up in the near future.
amazing story man cant wait for a sequel!
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Thank you for the feedback, I certainly plan on writing more stories about these two.