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wow, chrysalis sure is a sick, twisted woman
Another very excellent chapter. Except for the use of the word plot to refer to Chrysalis' behind. Please, just don't use brony terms in the story. The only time they are okay to use is in a Brony in Equestria story that is first person, and even then just barely.
Good god, Grev is like just a piece of meat to Twi, AJ and Shy huh: All of them want to mount him, and he's trying to be a gentlmen. This really is just like Tenchi Muyo :D And thats awesome!!
Ok . I squee'ed when I saw this in my email. Right in the middle of work ^_^ a embarrassment well worth a new chapter . Man fluttershy is a pushy drunk hah talking about split personalities, but in short she's 100%right ... But, with grevin and his insecurities he acted in both occasions perfectly imho. I can't wait to see how aj reacts to grevin coming home late and him explaining things to her. Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh.... We can haz next chapter soon peeeaaazzzzzzzeeeeeeee??? ^_^
Mane Medic
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Many stories use the word plot (in that sense) as a part of the Equestrian slang; so it is not really a problem
2918784I never made that connection before :) I loved that series and being compared to it is quite the compliment. Thanks :D
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We must be reading very different stories, because the few that i read that did the same thing had others saying the same thing that i have, and many writters advise against using fan made meta terms. Mostly because unless it is a first person perspective of a brony in equestria those terms would most likely not exist.
Grevin:
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Tenchi Muyo FUK YEAH!!!
yay! project ChrysaHades ship is a go!!!
also do moar!
i snickered at that.
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If you want to look at it seriously, many of the terms used in stories are fan made meta-terms; such as the use of buck as an analog for the F-word and every non-canon place name (Prance, Germaney, Trotland, Zebraca)
2919190 Your welcome :D!! Grev already has three of the mane six having the hots for him. If the remaining three suddenly develop feelings, then by god it really will be exactly like Tenchi Muyo :D. And thus making it even more hilarious ^_^.
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Plausible names for places that could exist in universe are okay. Fan slang that would most likely not exist as there slang is not. On that note the use of the word buck as a substitute for fuck is another weird one that would most likely not exist. At least not to me. I know someone had a forum post explaining of that one could exist as a real thing in universe.
Well, shit.... seems like our character has 3 main choices along with other lesser options (Luna,Chrysalis, etc.). I personally would like for him to go with Fluttershy. Feels like a right choice... I mean he saved her life! How will make sense to not love her. Also she seems to have the strongest feels for him.....
3048322 Honestly no. I hadn't even heard about that game until another user pointed it out to me. Just a happy little coincidence.![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
2921179 Praise The Sun! -Solaire the Sunbro
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I would hope not as I loved that game, the world included and it just seemed so full of past hope and beauty and I must admit that this vision of bastion is almost horrific for how nice everything seemed in the game
well after the whole (psst Spoilers) apocalypse thing and the race war going on and that the main character was an orphan
and that he was around 13-15 when everyone he knew died and he had to constantly risk his life as the last hope for survival and joined the military being posted in the most dangerous place before he was even 12, and his mother dying and him not knowing for several years and all her money (and his that he sent back) being stolen.....
actually forget I said anything
*whistles*