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love it
Well written and for the cadence part, don't sweat it. It was good, borderline rape in my opinion, but good.
A very excelent chapter. And I like the part with Cadance. It is the closes we will ever get to a male human/Princess Cadance romance. At least until someone actually attempts that.
Speaking of princesses, I wouldn't mind if Celestia also became a love interest.
Hope to see more whenver possible.
Sweet! I'm dying for more already!
Luf eet
So much personal development!
i really like stories that show the healing of injuries in a character, be they physical or psychological.
So many good feels coming off of this chapter.
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I checked, because it piqued my interest. There's not a single fic like that. At least not before we start going into the red ratings, and I stopped there. Someone has to write that! I'm especially keen to see how they'd solve the Shining Armor 'problem', and no, having him 'not exist' isn't an option that's any good. Maybe set the story a couple of hundred years later, so that he's out of the picture, and there has been time for mourning. It doesn't even have to exclude Twilight anymore :D
Well, enough about that and back to this story. I'm liking it quite a bit. Especially the fact that you're not just jumping into the romance without any preamble. These things need time to build, and Grevin is quite obviously not ready yet. Still, I do hope he becomes so in a not too distant future.
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Nope. Not even in the mature section. There is no story tat has a male human/Princess Cadance romance. Tyhere is one where it is a Discord/Cadance pairing, and he for some reason takes a human form, but that doesn't count.
Setting such a story in the future is one way to go, and the most obvious. Another way could be an AU where human grows up in Equestria story, and they grow up as friends.
Ok the Cadance kissing scene was very well done. I admit that after it got to a certain point I was wondering if she was planning on going all the way, but glad to see she was just teasing him and not cheating on Shining Armor.
I laughed my ass off when Celestia shocked Cadence by saying that she would have done more. The moment that part came up I screamed "Oh crap its Melestia!"
Personally I think that this chapter was well written and I can't wait to see the look on Luna's face when the 'Hero' comes to save the fillies on her sacred night. *evil laugh*
2282766 well...not the whole time lol glad you can enjoy my writing here too.
2216073....that gave me an interesting a.u. idea for this story...
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Which? The Cadance comment, or the Celestia comment?
2286236 more Cadance than Celestia but both have potential...just a matter of finding time to write.
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Oh. okay then. Then just do what you want to do for the story whenever you can.
Good luck with all of your endeavors.
2237129 I hope I continue to do well for you and the other readers. I am glad you got some laughs out of the chapter.
2194397 even if your english may be a little choppy, your comments are always welcomed and enjoyed so thank you for leaving them. I hope to continue to write good material for you to enjoy :)
2316293 I'm glad you liked it .
2320455 Thanks, I hope to continue to impress
I don't know about everypony else ... But I'm rooting for luna/grevin... ^_^ due to my preferance for appleshy/flutterjack. Any how great story and I look forward to the upcoming chapters and just how they unfold.
Mane Medic
*Pulls out Team Fluttershy shirt.* Go Fluttershy!
1015067 surrounded by fluttershy wearing different expression with various items for all eternity. The expressions/items can nsfw, but they all have to be adawable.
2403025 WOHT you fink your littel fiah can hurt me!!...oh wait fiah can hurt me WAA- AAAAAGHHHH( dead)
Well I for one am rooting for either a Luna or Twilight paring, as they are tied for first place as best pony. *pulls out flags* go twiluna harem!
2468310 Yeah, I try to catch and fix what I can but sadly with my current schedule I don't get to do much. I hope it doesn't ruin the story for you.
2468593 It's doesn't ruin it all! My reading just slows down a bit 'cause my mind pauses to correct the errors as I read over them, haha.
Anyways, loving the progression so far, this is one of the best HiE fics I've read
2345415 I was already wearing one when reading this story... okay haven't even started yet but I will now (hoping I don't regret it with these long updates)
I don't know about you guys/girls but I have my fingers crossed for Fluttershy.....
To be honest, I'm rooting for Fluttershy as the peiring, but I'd be okay with Twilight too. Though both of them would be awesome, I don't think you'd take the story that way, and it'd leave poor Applejack in the cold.
Good story, brah. Keep it goin'.
Insert Mindlessgonzo scream here. You know what I'm talking about if you have seen his Princess Molestia Dub vids
You got your wife hooked on the show? Nice. One more addition to the Pegasisters. Heh.
.....and I can't think of anything more to say. Therefore, Derpy!
Why cant one just simply stop time so i can read more :/
4919050 because time is a delicate thing that does not take kindly to people messing with it