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Huzzah! A new chapter! And this doesn't bode well. Neither the current situation, nor the upcoming estrus season. Poor Grevin... or maybe not.
A CHALLENGER APPEARS
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*cue theme music*
Moar!!!!!!!!!
Princess molestia reference, twijackshy grev fourway, adorableness and fun of nightmare night, and to top it off my favorite princess Luna rather forceful advance on grev! AND HE LIKED IT!!! best chapter yet IMHO ^_^ . Next chapter now please, don't make me send pinkypie 40k after you... I will..............
MANE MEDIC HATH SPOKEN!
PS... highwind; I couldn't have picked a better pic or song ^_^
A very awesome chapter. Especially the parts with Luna, Twi, AJ, and Flutters. Also, that tease Luna did about Celestia also being a flirt is very funny. Plus it makes me wonder if she will also be a potential love interest. It seems like a possibility, since Luna said that the ratio is 8:1.
On another note, I am kinda sad to see Crysalis in a antagonistic role. Oh well. Maybe when she is doing her plan she ends up falling in love with him, which could lead to her reformation. Plus maybe peace talks.
Hope to see more soon, and good luck with all of your endeavors.
Awesome!!
Lol glad your not dead. Well this is a lot longer than the portion that you sent me. Everything is fucking epic in this story. Can't wait for the heat to hit and I really can't wait to see Chrysalis and her plan fail miserably. Great job!
I read this at first on fanfiction and am quite happy to find it here. I am unhappy it's garnered so few views, but there's no explaining the fickle nature of readers ( their loss ).....THUMBS UP!
2628099HAH I'm an ideot
So Twilight, Applejack, Fluttershy and now Luna all want Grevin. He's in for a hell of alot once he chooses to open himself up. Is he gonna have to choose between them or is he gonna get all of them cause having a herd sounds alot better then choosing just one.
Good to know you're not dead!
2637634 I think so too lol
I sense a cliche, Chrysalis falling in love with Grevis... But who's to say cliches are bad.
The heat season chapter will be interesting
I have a feeling chrysalis is in for a bit of trouble soon. Either she makes him withdraw into himself again and incur the wrath of many a mare or he somehow figures her out. but, then again you never can tell what will happen
Just got done reading the story so far up to Chapter 18.
It's a very nice story, only complaint would be the grammar errors and typos that run rampant.
Pretty solid story, never read a single authors note until Chapter 18. I wonder if I should have at any point: oh well.
To reply to the author's last note: I'm really enjoying the idea of conflict via Chrysalis interference. Seems like it would be very interesting.
2832052 I would have to agree with you about all the errors. I'm trying to catch as many as I can but sadly there are always a few that seem to slip by. I'll continue to try and improve my writing and I hope it doesn't take any enjoyment of the story away from your reading.
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Well you know, the errors can easily destroy any sense of "immersion" you get from a story, but I can read through them, so don't worry too much about me.
No pinkie! Someone save the Rice Krispies!
Chrysalis you dumbfuck. You should know that that 'steal the guy out from under four mares' noses and use him to take over Equestria' thing never works. Silly, silly chrysalis.
God dammit chrysalis
No you won't. You'll be stone dead in a moment.