Never Alone

They were supposed to look after each other. Yet, Sonata had never felt so alone.

Pinkie wants to prove to her that she's wrong. She's never alone, not with her around.

Edited by Eternityflame and featherus of discord

Description help by Jackripper

Inspired by an old incomplete story i had started.

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RK_Striker_JK_5

RK_Striker_JK_5 #1 · Sep 25th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

There standing beside her was Adagio dazzle, but that wasn’t what everyone was staring at. Their hands were intertwined.

Okay, did not see that coming.

Rock Slide

Rock Slide #2 · Sep 25th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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Gidano90

Gidano90 #3 · Sep 25th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Ok, let's start by saying that I'm already enjoying this story. In fact, just a nice thumb up and right in my favorite list. I look forward to reading the next chapters.

P.S:

There standing beside her was Adagio dazzle, but that wasn’t what everyone was staring at. Their hands were intertwined.

WHAT!?!?!? this is unexpected

P.S.S: Nice Cover Art!

Cinder Vel

Cinder Vel #4 · Sep 25th, 2017 · 2 · · Chapter 1 ·

Seems sweet so far. Maaaaaaybe just a tiny small tini bit fast paced. Maybe, not definitely. And what a at the ending.

Feather Book

Feather Book #5 · Sep 25th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Even though I knew that twist at the end was going to happen, it was still unexpected.

It is a bit fast paced, and a lot of it feels rather passive. The perspective also jumps around a bit. But it's an interesting start. I want to see where this goes.

RK_Striker_JK_5

RK_Striker_JK_5 #6 · Sep 26th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

D'aww, that ending. :D

Superblox

Superblox #7 · Sep 26th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

*Hurk* The feels... My heart... Can't take it...

*Dies of Cuteness*

Gidano90

Gidano90 #8 · Sep 27th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Confess: You wanted to write this final in the second chapter because you wanted to make me die for diabetes, is not that right ?!

returning seriously, I congratulate you for this second chapter! I really enjoyed a lot and my desire to read the next chapters is growing more and more.

P.S: A little advice, nothing too serious, but in my opinion among the tags of the story you should also put that of Pinkie Pie as she and Sonata are the main protagonists of this story.

Erina Tail Yellow