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JesterOfDestiny


I ignore (almost) everything that happened after season 6.

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The conference gathers to present an important discovery: Conclusive evidence on the existence of humans, a whole skeleton of one. But it turns out to carry a deadly curse. A frightening apparition emerges from it, to chase away those who dare to disturb its slumber.

But is the Anthro-Phantom even real? Is there somepony behind it? Why? And most of all, whom?

Lyra Heartstrings takes it upon herself to answer those questions.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 6 )

A bit whiplashed at the end there. Also , don't use italics for spoken lines, quotation marks are fine. Italics are only used for private thoughts of the pov character, or illustrating when a speaker is emphasizing a specific word.

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Okay, I wasn't aware that there were specific rules for italicizing. At the time I thought it would be an easy way to distinguish spoken lines from translation. But I guess I'll change it then.

And so begins our Scooby-Doo episode.

I can't tell if Percy is being overly confusing on purpose or if it's just his character.

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Oh yeah, I definitely wrote him to be as obnoxious as possible.

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