After surviving an ambush, a lone pilot and soldier's fighter is incapacitated and slowly drifts towards the atmosphere of an unknown planet. Good news, he survives the crash. Bad news, his craft wasn't the only one who broke the atmosphere.
Okay for one he has to stop punching all the females he only knocks out the the stallions but not the females and can you make his armor it's like some kind of super armor like he's super strong and super fast and all the other stuff it just makes more sense really.
1. Would ya rather him riddle her with lead? He has a reason to. Its not like she was unarmed, and they did attack first. Would ya like that? Or would ya rather him go easy on her and pop her right in the sniffer?
2. It's just one chick whose nose he keeps breaking. It's the same mare that just has a durable face.
3. Also, keep in mind how he knocks out the stallions. Would ya like for him to knock 'er out the same brutal way he did them?
If ya have a problem with females getting injured, ya might like 7HiP better. ...after the first few chapters.
I kinda hoping he finally hits how just how small and inconsequential they are, I could see the planet being of strategic importance. With the subjects being of...... minor importance. It would be funny for him to point out.
“This is not War this is Pest control!”
Also I would like Luna’s impulsive behavior to bite her on the flank at some point.
Also please don’t have them suddenly understand his advanced technology I’m tired of that plot hole in stories. Ponies haven’t really shown that much impressive intellectual capacity, Twilight Sparkle is at best above average and she’s supposed to be the cream of the crop! Besides largely ponies seem to have a medieval mindset and society, with only a few oddity’s that are out of place.
9058594 Oh you worry too much. I wouldn't make such a novice mistake. This is precisely one of the reasons why I'm writing this fic. I've read too many ones where they have this exact plothole you speak of. Ponies knowing how to drive vehicles, or how to reload a gun (do I need to mention that the ponies aren't even anthro in these fics?) You won't find that here.
Also, you'll find in the next chapter about what happened to Luna, and how Sunbutt feels about it.
9137226 It would be funny to have then manage to take apart some of the technology, and realize they are in waaaaaay over their heads. You could make it comical and reference the idea of “cargo cults” with them assuming it’s all magical or something.
Also while some people might not like this depiction of Luna in stories I find it rather fitting. After being the ponies Boogiemare for so long, it’s not a stretch she would be impulsive in trying to protect them. She’s kinda the more edgy princess because of this, and it could easily cloud her judgement and make her make poor decisions trying to right her past. Tantabus anyone?
Kill all the ponies!!!
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"I'm very tempted to turn this castle into a glue factory, but I'm gonna hear 'em out first. Maybe teach 'em a lesson."
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Ooohhh~~ i like~
Interesting chapter. Heads are gonna roll, probably latterly, for taking his weapons. Lol
Look forward to the next chapter!
It’s alive
Okay for one he has to stop punching all the females he only knocks out the the stallions but not the females and can you make his armor it's like some kind of super armor like he's super strong and super fast and all the other stuff it just makes more sense really.
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1. Would ya rather him riddle her with lead? He has a reason to. Its not like she was unarmed, and they did attack first. Would ya like that? Or would ya rather him go easy on her and pop her right in the sniffer?
2. It's just one chick whose nose he keeps breaking. It's the same mare that just has a durable face.
3. Also, keep in mind how he knocks out the stallions. Would ya like for him to knock 'er out the same brutal way he did them?
If ya have a problem with females getting injured, ya might like 7HiP better. ...after the first few chapters.
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It never died. Just was coming along very very slowly
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I'm practically done writing it. Just checking on things and re-reading it.
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I know, I was being sarcastic
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SWEET!!!
I kinda hoping he finally hits how just how small and inconsequential they are, I could see the planet being of strategic importance. With the subjects being of...... minor importance. It would be funny for him to point out.
“This is not War this is Pest control!”
Also I would like Luna’s impulsive behavior to bite her on the flank at some point.
Also please don’t have them suddenly understand his advanced technology I’m tired of that plot hole in stories. Ponies haven’t really shown that much impressive intellectual capacity, Twilight Sparkle is at best above average and she’s supposed to be the cream of the crop! Besides largely ponies seem to have a medieval mindset and society, with only a few oddity’s that are out of place.
9058594 Oh you worry too much. I wouldn't make such a novice mistake. This is precisely one of the reasons why I'm writing this fic. I've read too many ones where they have this exact plothole you speak of. Ponies knowing how to drive vehicles, or how to reload a gun (do I need to mention that the ponies aren't even anthro in these fics?) You won't find that here.
Also, you'll find in the next chapter about what happened to Luna, and how Sunbutt feels about it.
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It would be funny to have then manage to take apart some of the technology, and realize they are in waaaaaay over their heads. You could make it comical and reference the idea of “cargo cults” with them assuming it’s all magical or something.
Also while some people might not like this depiction of Luna in stories I find it rather fitting. After being the ponies Boogiemare for so long, it’s not a stretch she would be impulsive in trying to protect them. She’s kinda the more edgy princess because of this, and it could easily cloud her judgement and make her make poor decisions trying to right her past. Tantabus anyone?
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That basically sums up this version of Luna. Quick to take matters into her own hands without thinking things through.
As for the tech, that's explained in the chapter I had just published.