After surviving an ambush, a lone pilot and soldier's fighter is incapacitated and slowly drifts towards the atmosphere of an unknown planet. Good news, he survives the crash. Bad news, his craft wasn't the only one who broke the atmosphere.
It's very nice, and interesting indeed. For now I give it a follow and Thumb up! If the story continues nicely I will give it a Fav and also follow you (:
There's a bit of grammar errors Thru out the chapter, but other then that this sounds very exciting! Might wanna watch the quality writing thou, some places almost seemed rushed, rushed stories don't go well togeather, so take more time to add detail and more...more to the chapter.
8426379 Yeah, I think I know what happened. I may have gotten a bit too eager to get this published, trying to get to the good part. It'll be better. May revise it again after the next chapter is posted. There will be a lot more details in the future, especially in battles. There'll have to be. 😉
good story so far
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Much appreciated.
Woo, looking forward to this.
I don't think coloured text will feel right in a fic like this.
Good start fanfiction what next .🖖
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Good to hear. Glad ya like it.
Im so following this and like it.
It's very nice, and interesting indeed. For now I give it a follow and Thumb up! If the story continues nicely I will give it a Fav and also follow you (:
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This isn't really about the story, but who is the guy in that meme?
There's a bit of grammar errors Thru out the chapter, but other then that this sounds very exciting!
Might wanna watch the quality writing thou, some places almost seemed rushed, rushed stories don't go well togeather, so take more time to add detail and more...more to the chapter.
8426379 Yeah, I think I know what happened. I may have gotten a bit too eager to get this published, trying to get to the good part. It'll be better. May revise it again after the next chapter is posted. There will be a lot more details in the future, especially in battles. There'll have to be. 😉
Thanks for the constructive criticism
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No problem man.
I look forward to reading more!